Alternate Ending for ‘Quality of Mercy’ (by csb)

Summary: This is an alternate ending for Quality Of Mercy. I wanted to pursue Adam and Joes’ argument further and resolve their differences.

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Alternate Ending for ‘Quality of Mercy’
Joe stood over his once close childhood friend. How could he have been deceived so easily; because you trusted him he thought? He felt like a fool but he also had another feeling he wasn’t too sure how to handle. It was betrayal, a loss of innocence; he no longer was able to take his friends at face value.
He turned his back on Seth and wiped the corner of his mouth, blood persistently trickled from a cut on his lip. Joe didn’t hear Seth roll over and pick up the gun he had fallen on. He didn’t hear the click of the hammer being pulled back, before Seth pulled the trigger.
Joe hit the ground face first and fell into darkness before the second shot was fired.  Adam stood staring into the unlit fireplace, seeking an answer to his youngest brother’s emotional turmoil. Why he changed his mind, he wondered. Something was wrong; Joe’s actions were very uncharacteristic.  He decided to ride out to the mine and talk to Seth and judge things for himself.
Adam took the path that led up to the small mine. As he got closer he heard scuffling, silence and then a shot. He kicked Sport to spur the horse on and saw Seth on his knees with a gun pointing at his brother’s prone body. His brother was laying face down in the dirt. Adam immediately drew his gun, and before Seth could fire off another shot, he fired a wounding shot. Seth fell forward face down in the dirt like his brother but unlike his brother he knew he wasn’t dead.

Adam jumped off Sport and kicked the gun away from Seth’s outstretched hand. His shoulder wound Adam noted was through and through. He knelt down next to Joe. Blood was slowly blooming on his back.

Adam grabbed a cloth from his saddle bag and gently pushed it under his brother’s shirt. He firmly pressed down over the wound. Joe whimpered and took short shallow breaths. “Easy Joe…I’m just trying to stop the bleeding…Slow down your breathing” Adam instructed his brother with a calm soothing voice.

“Adam…it hurts” Joe’s breathy voice pleaded.

“Sshh Joe…it’s alright little brother…I’m gonna take good care of you…Just concentrate on your breathing” Adam assured his brother. Joe flinched when Adam pressed harder, he felt guilty causing his brother such pain, but he had to stop the bleeding. Joe’s face was pale and his body started to shake uncontrollably. “Easy little Brother” Adam appeased him.

Adam looked over at Seth to make sure he wasn’t coming round. When he finally got the bleeding under control he told Joe to lay still. He placed a cloth either side of Seth’s wound and tied his hands together. He placed him under the tree Joe had tied Cochise to and put a canteen next to him. He tied Seth’s feet together and tied that rope to the tree. With Seth taken care of Adam carefully lifted his brother and placed him on Sport. He climbed up behind his brother and took the reins in one hand and snaked his arm around the slim waist of Joe with the other.

Adam sung softly into Joe’s ear as they made the long painful trek back to the Ponderosa. When he thought he was within earshot, he let off the Cartwright signal, three consecutive shots into the air. It was only a short time later that their foreman met up with Adam. “Len ride into town and send Doc Martin out to the house…also inform the sheriff that Seth Pruitt is tied to a tree near the Dagliesh Mine…tell him I’ll explain everything to him later but tell him Seth shot Joe in the back” he instructed his foreman. Len nodded and took off towards Virginia City.

Adam continued their journey towards the ranch house and was soon joined by Hoss. “What happened?…Little Joe!”

“Seth Pruitt shot him in the back” Adam told his brother. Joe chose that moment to arch his back and cry out in pain. “Sshh Joe…take it easy…we’re almost home” he said soothingly. Joe was gasping for breath as the pain radiated down his back. He tried to sit still in front of his brother but the pain was almost unbearable.

“I’m sorry Adam…I didn’t mean to get mad at you Adam”

“Sshh Joe don’t talk…save your strength” Adam told his brother and tightened his grip around his waist. Hoss watched his brother with concern not understanding why Seth had shot Joe and why Joe was apologising to Adam. Joe rested his head back onto his brother’s chest and felt the security his older brother always gave him. He concentrated on listening to Adams heartbeat trying to ignore the searing pain in his back.

Adam could feel his little brother’s warm blood against his chest. He stopped Sport and lent Joe forward. “Hoss do you have a spare handkerchief?”

“Here Adam” Hoss handed his brother one from his saddle bag. Adam pushed it up under Joe’s shirt and placed it over the cloth covering the wound. His little brother’s breathing sped up as Adam applied pressure to the wound.

“Easy Joe” Adam said softly in his ear “Slow down your breathing little brother” he instructed him. Joe lent back against his brother where he felt safest. He knew his brother would look after him, trusting him fully with his life. Adam started Sport up and the three brothers continued their journey home.

When they rode in, Hoss called out to their Pa. Ben came out of the house and took in the sight of Joe slumped back, leaning into his oldest brother. He came up beside Sport and raised his arms to take Joe “What happened?”

“Seth shot Joe in the back…I met up with Len earlier, he’s riding into town to get Doc Martin…I shot Seth before he shot Joe again…he’ll live” Adam told his father as he passed his little brother to him. Hoss took Joe from his father and carried him into the house up to Joe’s bedroom. He gently sat Joe on his bed. Ben took his jacket off and then his shirt. When he moved the shirt away from the wound Joe reacted straight away. He arched his back and drew in a breath. Ben, Adam and Hoss froze and waited for Joe to let out the breath.

“Oh God…it hurts” he whispered, screwing his face up with pain. He was very pale Ben thought.

“Joe we’re going to lay you down on your stomach…ok?” Ben said softly to his son.

“Yes Pa” Joe answered his father. “I’m sorry Pa” he said despairingly knowing his father was disappointed in him.

“Sshh…Don’t worry about that now. Let’s just get you better” he told his son reassuringly. He pushed his son’s hair back off his face. His face and body were covered in a sheen of sweat, Ben noticed and he was breathing too fast he also thought.

Adam observed his father’s concern “He’s in a lot of pain Pa…The ride home was very hard on him but he didn’t complain” he said looking down on his little brother proudly.

“Do you know why Seth shot Joe?” Ben asked his eldest son.

“He killed him…he killed Sara’s father for the mine…he found silver and he killed him for it” Joe said despondently. He felt so foolish for believing his friend, his faith in people shaken to the core. Ben sensed his son’s despair and knew he would need to talk with his son later. Hoss entered the room with two bowls; one with cool water and one with warm water. He also had some fresh bandages for the wound. While Hoss and Adam cleaned the wound, Ben ran a cloth over Joe’s face trying to cool him down.

Joe’s breathing was ragged and he was holding onto the bed so tightly his knuckles were white. He was biting his lip to stop himself from crying out as Adam and Hoss cleaned the wound. Ben could see a large bruise and some swelling above Joe’s eye. “Did you fight with Seth Joe?”

“Yes” Joe squeezed out through gritted teeth.

“Almost done Joe” Adam said encouragingly.

“You’re doing real good little brother” Hoss added.

When they were done they covered Joe with a sheet and Ben continued to bath his face and shoulders. Joe began to shake uncontrollably, adding more pain to his back. He screwed his face up trying to hold back the moans; he was a picture of misery. Deep down he felt he deserved this pain, having let so many people down. Tears began to form in his eyes when he thought of Sara. While he was trying to protect her he was in fact betraying her trust in him. Friendship was an important thing to Joe and he agonised over the lost long-time friendship the three of them had and he was partly to blame.

“Son, it’s going to be alright…we’ll work this out…sshh” he’s father tried to pacify him but Joe was beyond consoling. Guilt, blame and anguish tore at his soul and there was nothing his family could do or say to heal it.

When Doc Martin finally arrived Joe was as pale as the sheets he lay on. His breathing was laboured and his eyes were squeezed tightly shut. “Joe I’m going to look at the wound. I need to remove the bandages…this is going to hurt” Doc Martin told his patient. Joe just answered with a grunt, all his concentration aimed at controlling himself from crying out.

As Doc Martin removed the bandages Joe bit down on his lip so hard it bled. Groans escaped through his tightly held together mouth. Before he could react a cloth was placed over his mouth and nose and he drifted into darkness. Hoss and Adam left the room and sat down in front of the fireplace. Ben stayed with Joe and watched him while his long time friend removed the bullet from his son’s back. He held it up.

“Who shot Joe?” he asked.

“Seth Pruitt” Ben said with disgust.

“Why?…He and Joe have been friends since they were kids” Doc Martin said with disbelief.

“Turns out Seth killed Sara’s father…he told Joe and I’m guessing Joe wanted him to turn himself in but Seth had other plans” Ben told the doctor as he bandaged his son.

“He should be alright Ben…but you’ll need to watch for infection” he told him. “I’ll come back tomorrow to check on him”.

“Thank you Paul” Ben followed his friend out of his son’s room.

“How is he?” Adam asked as soon as he saw the doctor on the staircase.

“He’ll be fine Adam” Doc Martin said reassuringly.

“He was in a lot of pain” Adam stated.

“That’s because of where the bullet was positioned. He’ll feel a lot better when he wakes up…as I told your Pa, just watch for infection” Doc Martin told the brothers.

“I’m going to sit with him” Adam said protectively.

Doc Martin looked at Ben questionably. “It’s a long story but it was Adam that Joe confided in about Seth, so Adam feels a little responsible for what happened.”

“Adam found Little Joe after Seth shot him” Hoss added.

“Well I’ll come by tomorrow to check on Joe” Doc Martin said as he gathered up his hat and coat and left.

Ben sighed, Hoss put his hand on his father’s shoulder “Dadburnit, how could Seth kill Sara’s father for a mine?”

“I guess when you haven’t had much for most of your life…greed can take over and you lose yourself” Ben said not quite understanding himself why Seth had to kill Sara’s father when they were going to get married anyway. “I better go and see Sara” Ben said urgently.

“Do you want me to come with you Pa?” Hoss asked.

“No you stay here with your brothers…I won’t be long…I might bring Sara back with me…Will you let Hop Sing know?”

“Yes sir” Hoss told his father and watched him leave, not envying him with the task.

Joe’s eyes fluttered open. “Joe…Joe” Adam called to his brother.
“Adam…Adam my back hurts” Joe told his older brother.

“Drink this Joe, it’ll make you feel better” Adam directed him as he gently raised his head. Joe obediently drank the medicine. Adam straightened his bed clothes “Now sleep Joe…it’s the best thing for you” he told his brother.

“Thank you Adam…I love you older brother” Joe said as he drifted off to sleep. Adam felt his face flush and his eyes burned. He blinked back tears as old memories of his six year old brother came flooding back. Little Joe always said that to him before going to sleep at night.

“I love you too Little Joe” he said softly. He knew Joe was going to have a hard time coming to terms with Seth’s deceit. Somehow with the family support, Joe would get through this and be a better and a stronger person. Despite all the guilt and despair, his family will be with him every step of the way.

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8 thoughts on “Alternate Ending for ‘Quality of Mercy’ (by csb)

  1. Bonanza fan fiction stories are the best. The perfect alternate ending. Fans really know how to show case the Adam/Joe relationship.

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