Interval (by JC)


Summary:  What is it like, being a Cartwright daughter?  Only one person could tell you, and it might not be what you think. Chronologically, this story takes place shortly after Winter of Discontent and is an expansion of a recent Pine Cone Challenge bit posted in the forum, the prompt being “The Particular Sadness of Lemon Cake.”  (Part of the Ties That Bind series)

Rating:  T    (2,093 words)

Ties That Bind series

Ties That Bind
Imperfect Memory
A Pearl Without Price
A Piece of Cake
Something About Amy
Guarding the Henhouse
When Angels Cry
No Ordinary Day
Winter of Discontent
Gently, Full of Grace 




Jilly Cartwright lingered at the upstairs open window, watching the sun go down at the edge of the city, and remembering. The San Francisco that greeted her nearly five years ago was a shadow of what now stretched before her. Multiple-storied structures dotted an evolving skyline of hotels, banks, and law offices interspersed with private residences and businesses of every imaginable kind. Uncle Miles called it “the city of greed and gold.” If it could be bought and sold, a person could find it here, he assured her. But what good did it do anyone in the end?

Laughter drew her attention to the street below where a young couple waited for an approaching carriage. A lamplighter doffed his cap to them as he passed. There was something in the man’s ease of movement that made Jilly smile and put a lump in her throat at the same time. She thought of her brothers and wondered what they might be doing.

Her gaze reverted to the letter in her hand, the most recent one from Pa, though she could quote it from memory by now.

I am so proud of the young woman you have become. Your mother would be proud too. Lately I’ve been thinking of that morning in May when we tended her grave and planted the flowers. Watching you, I was reminded how much of her lives on in you. It brought me great comfort then, and the memory of that day warms me even now.”

It had been a sun-kissed, picture perfect beginning, with spring easing into summer amid fields of sweet clover and wildflowers beneath a canopy of endless azure blue. For the first time during her visit, she had her father all to herself—a rare gift—and she realized how much she had missed even the sound of his voice, among so many other things. It was a day she knew she would never forget, yet she had nearly spoiled it with a single remark as their conversation veered toward her brothers.

“You don’t love me the way you love them.”

The words had spilled from a place so deeply locked away she hardly knew it existed, out of her mouth before she could stop them. The perplexed, wounded look on her father’s face as they hung in the air between them told her she might just as well have slapped him. She quickly did her best to explain what she really meant as though she understood it herself, and to her relief he seemed satisfied.

Whatever had possessed her to say such an appalling thing in the first place? By any standard, there could be no better father in the world than Ben Cartwright, and she’d never had any reason to doubt his love. Not even when he sent her away to San Francisco. But she had left as a child and returned a young woman, and the interval proved more than just the sum of time and miles.

The house she grew up in had changed very little, except for her room. In her absence it had primarily been reserved for guests, her father had explained, pointing out the freshly painted walls and new furniture, bedding, and curtains. He seemed anxious for her approval, and she hid her disappointment behind a well-honed smile. It was beautiful, she’d agreed, but there was nothing to indicate she had ever lived there. It was as if her past was a rug that had been pulled out from under her feet, her childhood swept away with the dust and the cobwebs.

Other changes were inevitable. Her brothers were all older, with Joe no longer a boy. To their credit, they had practically tripped over each other at times trying to make her feel welcome, which she found endearing, but it also added to the feeling of being a guest in her own home. They regaled her with stories of things she had missed, like the bonanza that created silver fortunes overnight for people like Annie O’Toole and Swede Lundberg; Lotta Crabtree’s infamous visit to Virginia City; and the day a fourth ‘Mrs. Cartwright’ arrived at the ranch, to the surprise of everyone, including the supposed groom. Over the next few weeks she became familiar with names like Henry Comstock, Sam Clemens, Philip Diedesheimer, and Clementine Hawkins. And others, more sinister, like Sam Bryant and Red Twilight. She learned about Emily Pennington, Amy Bishop, and Regina Darian; and the tragic ends of their friends Delphine and Ross Marquette.

Like their father, her brothers bore the burdens of men, including love’s loss, and they had spent the past few years building an empire alongside him. Her life in San Francisco seemed inconsequential by comparison. And it didn’t take long for her to see what everyone else in the newly formed Nevada Territory already knew, that the Cartwrights were a singular entity as distinctive as the Pine Tree brand, whose influence carried well beyond the borders of the Ponderosa. They might fight among themselves on occasion, but against outsiders they moved in lock step, and one was as good as all four. Everyone seemed to know that, but few people seemed to know or remember that there were actually five.

Jilly watched them in awe that summer with a new awareness of what it meant to be a Cartwright, most notably the differences between sons and a daughter. Sons were a man’s strength and lifeblood; through them he would live on as they carried his name to the next generation. But it was more than that. The impenetrable bond uniting her father and brothers had been forged through experiences in which she had no part. They had walked through fire together, without her, emerging even stronger. She was, for all practical purposes, an outlier. In hindsight, she supposed she’d been one ever since her mother died. More and more, she found herself missing the woman she never knew.

What an inconvenience she must have been for her poor father. Of course, he loved her and was proud of her, but it wasn’t the fierce love and pride he had for his sons, nor would it ever be. She’d lately come to realize that the tenderness in his eyes was as much for her mother’s memory as it was for her, perhaps more. If that was a comfort to him, then she was glad, but she wondered sometimes if he really saw her at all.

Her own picture sat on his desk, along with the ones of his three wives. They were lovely footnotes in the family history, and the world of Cartwright men had gone on without them, even thrived, just as it had in her absence. There were time she felt like a ghost herself, hovering on the fringes of their lives.

They loved her, each in their own way, as well as they could. But they did not need her the way they needed each other.

And oh, how she loved them. When she was a child she’d thought they were indestructible, because nothing bad ever happened that wasn’t made right in the end, at least not that she could recall. But she was no longer that naive. She had seen evil in the world, and terrible things had happened to people she loved through no fault of their own. Her family seemed to live in the mid path of harm’s way, sometimes mandated by the mere fact that they were Cartwrights. For unto whomsoever much is given, of him shall be much required. Sacrifice was something her father understood better than most men, and he had impressed that ideal upon his children, particularly his sons. Who wouldn’t be proud of them?

Christmas had come and gone, and in spite of her hopes there had been no more letters from any of them, so she read the old ones over and over to remind herself they not forgotten her, and to quiet the voices that sometimes whispered in her head. Even though she knew they were false, they were cunning and insistent during her weakest moments. Like today.

A sudden, biting gust of wind took her breath. Shivering, she drew back inside the window and pulled it shut against the unexpected cold. As cold as a witch’s tit,” she’d heard Hoss say once. He’d forgotten her presence and had blushed profusely at her wide-eyed reaction coupled with the snickers from Joe and Adam. But she hadn’t minded. In fact, she grinned every time she thought of it, though a proper young lady would never utter such a thing out loud. As cold as the grave. That was more suitable. Poor Aunt Margaret. No, that wasn’t right, because Aunt Margaret didn’t feel the cold, and she was no longer sick or sad or missing her daughters. What was it like, Jilly wondered, that moment when a person steps from here to there? Was it glorious as she had been taught all her life, or was there simply nothing at all? To feel nothing didn’t seem like such a bad thing anymore…

Her head ached, and she hadn’t finished her essay. She’d put it off until after the funeral. Wrapping her shawl around her, she lit the lamp on her desk, and sat down to write. For several moments she did nothing but stare at a blank piece of paper until it was merely a blur. She pulled her handkerchief from her sleeve and wiped her eyes, remembering her first birthday away from home. Aunt Margaret had made her a beautiful cake, the favorite of all her girls, she’d said. In spite of the festivities and her guardians’ generosity, Jilly went to bed that night feeling bereft without really knowing why, unable to give voice to the particular sadness of lemon cake when your heart longs for chocolate. Hop Sing would have known. He always knew.

Her teacher—dear, sweet Miss Somervelle—had sensed how miserable she was, encouraging her to write all of her unhappy thoughts on paper and then tear them up. “That way you’ll have power over them, instead of the other way around,” she’d told her. Jilly wasn’t sure why, but it helped. Of course, that was when she was barely twelve.

Forgoing her assignment, she wrote things she would never allow herself to say, praying that God would forgive her for being so faithless. When she was finished, she agreed that some of them probably did belong in the dustbin, but she didn’t tear them up. For now it was enough to have them corralled on a page rather than running loose in her head where they could overtake her without warning. They were for her eyes only. Her family would never understand the fact that sometimes she felt more lonely among them than apart from them, and her pain would only hurt them too.

I’m sorry, Pa.

He was expecting her home in the spring. There would be no good way to tell him she didn’t plan to stay. She wasn’t yet sure what she would do, but there must certainly be jobs for teachers in places where Cartwright was simply a name, where she could be judged on her own merit, loved or not for herself instead of her father’s fortune. Or maybe she would go to New Orleans, where she might still find traces of her mother. Either way, her family would try to talk her out of leaving; no doubt they would all have something to say. She would respect them and listen, but it wouldn’t change anything. Her mind was set.

But first she had to graduate. And so, with the weight of indecision lifted, she finished her essay and had to admit it was quite good, perhaps one of her best. That night, as she drifted into a dreamless sleep, her last thoughts were of her father…

You look at me with tender eyes and smile
As you remember your beloved one
Yes, I am your flesh and blood, your child
But woe to me, for I am not a son.





Tags:  Angst, Ben Cartwright, Jilly Cartwright, sister

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Author: JC

I've been writing Bonanza since 2004 when I posted my first story, "Ties That Bind", which introduced a Cartwright daughter. In addition to that series and another loosely based on the life of Pernell Roberts, I've written everything from drama to comedy, from poetry to parody, most of which you will find here in the Brand library. I enjoy porch swings, logic puzzles, old movies, crisp fall mornings, family game nights, and PIE. Dogs and children seem to like me (but they forget to leave reviews, hint, hint). If you like my stories, I'd love to hear from you. Thanks for reading! #CartwrightsForever #Moo

18 thoughts on “Interval (by JC)

  1. Jilly is such a wonderful character, a very worthy and deserving member of the Cartwright family. It’s a bittersweet tale, and shows just how difficult it would be for a woman to fit into what is, even to her, an all-male Cartwright world. You express how we all view them, but through her eyes – indestructible and walking through fire together – the perfect summation. I’ll never get tired of Jilly – keep these tales coming!

    1. What a lovely surprise to find your review, Sierra Girl! Your affection for Jilly warms my heart. It’s a bit of a heartache thinking how lonely she must have been on her way to becoming a woman, wondering how to fit in among all that maleness as nature’s boundaries became increasingly clear. One can only hope she will eventually find happiness in true love before she succumbs to the Cartwright curse… Thanks for reading!

  2. After reading my first review on this story I realized I can’t add anything to it but I do agree with other reviews. She does need to go and make a name for herself and I wish her the best in whatever path she chooses. Someday I think she will come to realize that she is a true Cartwright, just in a different form.

    1. When we’re young, it’s hard to see beyond our own emotional perspective. She will eventually find her place in this incredible family of hers, but it may be a long and difficult path of self-discovery before it leads her back home. Thanks so much for reading through the series, AC! 🙂

  3. Oh how I could feel Jilly’s disappointment in her place in life, yet determined it would not tie her down. Hope for a future where she’d make the name proud, whether anyone knew or not.

  4. Wow, JC. You know me; I find Cartwright daughters nauseating–all but Jilly. Jilly is an OC’s OC. She provides a lens through which to examine the Cartwrights in a different way; that’s exactly what any OC should do, IMO, and she does it incredibly well. I loved reading this all-too-brief examination of life as a Cartwright…the “wrong” kind of Cartwright, or maybe just the “other” kind of Cartwright, the kind who wasn’t part of the rollicking adventure, the one who didn’t make the legend. The one who wasn’t a son. Wow again. Great story, JC–more like it, please!

    1. “The one who didn’t make the legend.” Well said, sandspur. Thanks so much for reading and sharing your thoughts about Jilly. I’m glad she has held up for you over the years. I’m sure we haven’t heard the last of her. 🙂

  5. I love Jilly in your stories Pam, hope you can find a way for her to return and still be herself. Feeling she has to live up to the Cartwright name, and being a girl is even harder. She has 3 doting brothers and of course an overprotective father. I think at times even the brothers must have felt like her, trying to live up to the great Ben Cartwright.

    1. Thank you, Chris. You are such a faithful reader, and I always appreciate your comments. 🙂 I guess you could say Jilly is at another crossroads in her life, and it may be a long road home, who can tell? You make a good point about the brothers, trying to live up the their father. Ben Cartwright casts a long shadow.

  6. I want to go back and read the stories from the beginning, especially when Jilly was introduced. As a young girl, I inserted my own female characters into stories that I wrote and played in my mind. As much as I enjoy the Cartwright men, it is always interesting to think about the adventures of a Cartwright woman. Thank you for the change of pace story.

    1. A female Cartwright certainly provides new avenues to explore, imagining how she could realistically fit in, with a plausible explanation for why she doesn’t appear in the series. Developing the brother/sister/father/daughter relationships has been an interesting creative challenge, and I’ve tried to portray her as a credible character who enhances the original C’s. Thanks for leaving your comments, Chavel. I’d love to hear from you again after you’ve had time to read the rest of the series. 🙂

  7. First off, I have to admit I’ve not read the entire series (and I’m wanting to start at the beginning to get the entire picture). I have read a few of the more recent installments and I’ve enjoyed seeing Jilly as part of the family – Ben’s doting, and her brothers looking out for her. I saw in some of those stories that there would be a hole in their lives if she were no longer there. I think what struck me most about her thoughts here was the reference to her picture on the desk, in the “ladies” place of honor. This piece made me realize how different it would be for a girl/young lady to fit into the family as we know it. I feel she would have to be a bit tomboyish to keep up with the brothers, but in the end they would still treat her differently, and protect her in different ways from each other. I don’t believe she is trivial to the family, just different. A perhaps she needs more time to find that special place. I hope she doesn’t completely deny her heritage (as she thinks about going where the name is not known). Perhaps she just needs to be back with the family, and away from the maudlin atmosphere she’s been surrounded by for quite a while. Thanks for showing us this perspective. It will be interesting to see what path she chooses.

    1. AC, I’m glad to hear from someone else who likes Jilly, and I hope you have a chance to read the series, or at the very least, Ties That Bind, which reveals so much about her and her relationship with her family, particularly Joe and Adam. There’s a big difference between the girl who leaves and the one who returns four years later, and the summer she spends at home is another turning point for her (you’ll know why if you read When Angels Cry, a rewrite of “The Flannel Mouth Gun”). Thanks so much for your comments!

  8. Thank you, Questfan, for the high praise and detailed review. It means more than you know!

    Jilly has evolved throughout this series, and I’ve tried to imagine her life at every turn. I suspect she might at times be a little intimidated by the Cartwright men en masse, especially from her solitary vantage point. She knows she will never be able to compete with them, and she accepts that. That can’t be a good feeling. (If you go back and look at Winter of Discontent, you’ll see things from Ben’s POV.) Sometimes I wonder why I’ve spent so much time developing a character that so many people want to run from, and then I read a review like yours and know it’s because she resonates with a select few. If she wasn’t a Cartwright, people might even love her. Of course, if I wanted more of a following I guess I should be writing Joe instead. 🙂

  9. I’ve said this many times to you that I am not generally a fan of Cartwright daughters and yet this series is just so wonderfully done and Jilly is such a well fleshed out character that I want to know more about her. This is a beautiful embellishment of your pinecone and reflects so well on what Jilly would have felt and endured as the only living Cartwright woman in the family. The other three were left on their respective pedestals whereas she was a real, living, breathing human being with real feelings and real hurts. I think you have given voice to what many girls have felt in many families and cultures without it sounding brattish or maudlin. It just is.

  10. Every little girl who ever dreamed of being a Cartwright dreamed of a different ending, I’m sure. The relationship of the men to each other as expressed here probably met Dortort’s vision of the men and their relationship, without the complications of a woman who stayed around. Wonderful writing; wonderful description of a young girls angst.

    1. I love it when a reader speaks directly to the heart of what I tried to convey. Trish, thank you for the insightful review, the lovely compliment, and most of all, the gift of your time. 🙂

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