{"id":3505,"date":"2013-08-26T08:22:48","date_gmt":"2013-08-26T12:22:48","guid":{"rendered":"https:\/\/bonanzabrand.info\/library\/?p=3505"},"modified":"2025-02-18T19:18:55","modified_gmt":"2025-02-19T00:18:55","slug":"ponderosa-pining","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/bonanzabrand.info\/library\/?p=3505","title":{"rendered":"Ponderosa Pining (by freyakendra)"},"content":{"rendered":"<p>Poems written in tribute to and framed around our boys, addressing the things that make them so special to us.<\/p>\n<p>Rated: K \u00a0(2,200 words)<strong>\u00a0<\/strong><\/p>\n<ul>\n<li>\u201c<strong>Ponderosa Pine<\/strong>\u201d &#8212; An homage to the majestic guardian of Cartwright dreams.<\/li>\n<li>\u201c<strong>Ben\u2019s Advice<\/strong>\u201d &#8212; Cherish what you have, for blessings often carry a price<\/li>\n<li>\u201c<strong>The Cartwright Brothers, Three<\/strong>\u201d &#8212; A sad yet endearing tale of Adam, old and tired, returning to what isn&#8217;t quite the empty home he&#8217;d expected.<\/li>\n<li>\u201c<strong>From Sea to Saddle<\/strong>\u201d &#8212; A sonnet for Adam to honor Pernell&#8217;s birthday in response to a challenge posted by Cheaux at the forums.<\/li>\n<li>\u201c<strong>To Joe<\/strong>\u201d &#8212; When letters don&#8217;t suffice, Adam drafts a poem to help Joe understand why he left.<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<p>Reviews from old library are on page 2<\/p>\n<p>&nbsp;<\/p>\n<p style=\"text-align: center;\"><strong>\u00a0Ponderosa Pine<br \/>\n<\/strong><\/p>\n<p style=\"text-align: center;\"><a href=\"https:\/\/i0.wp.com\/bonanzabrand.info\/library\/wp-content\/uploads\/2014\/04\/renotrip.jpg?ssl=1\"><img data-recalc-dims=\"1\" loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" class=\"alignnone size-medium wp-image-3761 img-responsive\" src=\"https:\/\/i0.wp.com\/bonanzabrand.info\/library\/wp-content\/uploads\/2014\/04\/renotrip.jpg?resize=300%2C197&#038;ssl=1\" alt=\"renotrip\" width=\"300\" height=\"197\" srcset=\"https:\/\/i0.wp.com\/bonanzabrand.info\/library\/wp-content\/uploads\/2014\/04\/renotrip.jpg?resize=300%2C197&amp;ssl=1 300w, https:\/\/i0.wp.com\/bonanzabrand.info\/library\/wp-content\/uploads\/2014\/04\/renotrip.jpg?resize=200%2C132&amp;ssl=1 200w, https:\/\/i0.wp.com\/bonanzabrand.info\/library\/wp-content\/uploads\/2014\/04\/renotrip.jpg?resize=768%2C506&amp;ssl=1 768w, https:\/\/i0.wp.com\/bonanzabrand.info\/library\/wp-content\/uploads\/2014\/04\/renotrip.jpg?resize=1018%2C670&amp;ssl=1 1018w, https:\/\/i0.wp.com\/bonanzabrand.info\/library\/wp-content\/uploads\/2014\/04\/renotrip.jpg?resize=600%2C395&amp;ssl=1 600w, https:\/\/i0.wp.com\/bonanzabrand.info\/library\/wp-content\/uploads\/2014\/04\/renotrip.jpg?w=1182&amp;ssl=1 1182w\" sizes=\"auto, (max-width: 300px) 100vw, 300px\" \/><\/a><\/p>\n<p style=\"text-align: center;\">XxXxX<\/p>\n<p style=\"text-align: center;\">The proud, old ponderosa pine<br \/>\nmasthead over mountain seas<br \/>\nstands as sentry throughout time<br \/>\nguarding dreams and memories:<\/p>\n<p style=\"text-align: center;\">stalwart men who stole my heart<br \/>\nfrom the moment it first came to beat<br \/>\ncowboy knights who plied the art<br \/>\nof chivalry with courageous feats<\/p>\n<p style=\"text-align: center;\">fighting outlaws, holding hope<br \/>\nteaching truth along the way<br \/>\nhelping me to grow and cope<br \/>\nwhen the world itself seemed to betray<\/p>\n<p style=\"text-align: center;\">all that was and what should be<br \/>\nand what I knew could be again<br \/>\nif I but tried to look, to see<br \/>\nthe path to love, to faith, to friends.<\/p>\n<p style=\"text-align: center;\">When words like polished leather shine<br \/>\nI\u2019ll rest my pen, my hand, my screen<br \/>\nAnd wait for that majestic pine<br \/>\nTo ferry me to kindred dreams.<\/p>\n<p style=\"text-align: center;\">XxXxX<\/p>\n<p>&nbsp;<\/p>\n<p style=\"text-align: center;\"><a href=\"https:\/\/i0.wp.com\/bonanzabrand.info\/library\/wp-content\/uploads\/2014\/02\/ben3.jpg?ssl=1\"><img data-recalc-dims=\"1\" loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" class=\"alignnone size-medium wp-image-377 img-responsive\" src=\"https:\/\/i0.wp.com\/bonanzabrand.info\/library\/wp-content\/uploads\/2014\/02\/ben3.jpg?resize=300%2C225&#038;ssl=1\" alt=\"ben3\" width=\"300\" height=\"225\" srcset=\"https:\/\/i0.wp.com\/bonanzabrand.info\/library\/wp-content\/uploads\/2014\/02\/ben3.jpg?resize=300%2C225&amp;ssl=1 300w, https:\/\/i0.wp.com\/bonanzabrand.info\/library\/wp-content\/uploads\/2014\/02\/ben3.jpg?resize=200%2C150&amp;ssl=1 200w, https:\/\/i0.wp.com\/bonanzabrand.info\/library\/wp-content\/uploads\/2014\/02\/ben3.jpg?w=320&amp;ssl=1 320w\" sizes=\"auto, (max-width: 300px) 100vw, 300px\" \/><\/a><\/p>\n<p style=\"text-align: center;\"><strong>Ben\u2019s Advice<\/strong><\/p>\n<p style=\"text-align: center;\"><em>*Cherish what you have, for blessings often carry a price\u00a0<\/em><\/p>\n<p style=\"text-align: center;\">XxXxX<\/p>\n<p style=\"text-align: center;\">It was a dream, a silly thing,<br \/>\nthe kind that makes you shake your head<br \/>\nand think about the things you ate<br \/>\nor drank before you went to bed.<\/p>\n<p style=\"text-align: center;\">I found myself conversing with<br \/>\na character from long ago,<br \/>\nanother time, another place \u2013<br \/>\na Technicolor TV show.<\/p>\n<p style=\"text-align: center;\">His name was Ben, a gentle man<br \/>\nwith sons who made him beam with pride.<br \/>\nAlas, he also felt alone;<br \/>\nA widower, he\u2019d lost his bride.<\/p>\n<p style=\"text-align: center;\">In fact not one, but three he\u2019d loved.<br \/>\nThree women, three disparate lives,<br \/>\nhad turned his head and found his heart;<br \/>\nthree headstrong, independent wives,<\/p>\n<p style=\"text-align: center;\">had graced his life, helped build his dreams<br \/>\nand given him his three, fine boys,<br \/>\neach son unique, a special breed.<br \/>\nThey filled his broken heart with joy.<\/p>\n<p style=\"text-align: center;\">Adam, so like Lancelot,<br \/>\nBen\u2019s first-born was a gallant man.<br \/>\nHonor and nobility<br \/>\nwere always under his command.<\/p>\n<p style=\"text-align: center;\">Eric next, the one called Hoss,<br \/>\nwould wrestle bears to save his kin.<br \/>\nHe cherished every scrap of life,<br \/>\nand never had a thought for sin.<\/p>\n<p style=\"text-align: center;\">And then along came Little Joe,<br \/>\na vibrant lad, so quick of heart,<br \/>\nhis temperament was fierce and strong,<br \/>\nand love, for him, a special art.<\/p>\n<p style=\"text-align: center;\">Yes, Ben was blessed, despite his loss;<br \/>\nhis room, his bed, were his alone,<br \/>\nand yet his heart and hearth were full<br \/>\nwith loving sons, with sense of home.<\/p>\n<p style=\"text-align: center;\">I gave this gentle Ben a smile,<br \/>\nand he gave me some wise advice.<br \/>\nHe told me cherish what I have,<br \/>\nthough blessings sometimes have a price,<\/p>\n<p style=\"text-align: center;\">they also help to fill the voids<br \/>\nthat hardships often leave behind;<br \/>\nwe must not let the voids fill us\u2014<br \/>\nbe brave, be bold, be true, be kind.<\/p>\n<p style=\"text-align: center;\">I woke refreshed and strong of heart,<br \/>\nthe Ponderosa in my grasp,<br \/>\nfor Ben had shown me how to see<br \/>\nthe light beyond a darkened path.<\/p>\n<p style=\"text-align: center;\">XxXxX<\/p>\n<p>&nbsp;<\/p>\n<p>&nbsp;<\/p>\n<p><a href=\"https:\/\/i0.wp.com\/bonanzabrand.info\/library\/wp-content\/uploads\/2014\/04\/bens-3-sons.jpg?ssl=1\"><img data-recalc-dims=\"1\" loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" class=\"alignnone size-medium wp-image-3763 img-responsive\" src=\"https:\/\/i0.wp.com\/bonanzabrand.info\/library\/wp-content\/uploads\/2014\/04\/bens-3-sons.jpg?resize=300%2C225&#038;ssl=1\" alt=\"bens-3-sons\" width=\"300\" height=\"225\" srcset=\"https:\/\/i0.wp.com\/bonanzabrand.info\/library\/wp-content\/uploads\/2014\/04\/bens-3-sons.jpg?resize=300%2C225&amp;ssl=1 300w, https:\/\/i0.wp.com\/bonanzabrand.info\/library\/wp-content\/uploads\/2014\/04\/bens-3-sons.jpg?resize=200%2C150&amp;ssl=1 200w, https:\/\/i0.wp.com\/bonanzabrand.info\/library\/wp-content\/uploads\/2014\/04\/bens-3-sons.jpg?resize=768%2C576&amp;ssl=1 768w, https:\/\/i0.wp.com\/bonanzabrand.info\/library\/wp-content\/uploads\/2014\/04\/bens-3-sons.jpg?resize=480%2C360&amp;ssl=1 480w, https:\/\/i0.wp.com\/bonanzabrand.info\/library\/wp-content\/uploads\/2014\/04\/bens-3-sons.jpg?resize=533%2C400&amp;ssl=1 533w, https:\/\/i0.wp.com\/bonanzabrand.info\/library\/wp-content\/uploads\/2014\/04\/bens-3-sons.jpg?w=960&amp;ssl=1 960w\" sizes=\"auto, (max-width: 300px) 100vw, 300px\" \/><\/a><\/p>\n<p><strong>The Cartwright Brothers, Three<\/strong><\/p>\n<p><em>***A sad yet endearing tale of Adam, old and tired, returning to what isn&#8217;t quite the empty home he&#8217;d expected.<\/em><\/p>\n<p>XxXxX<\/p>\n<p>At three a.m. I came awake; my eye had spilled a tear.<br \/>\nA captured image from a dream had surely placed it there.<br \/>\nA tired, old man had made it home to find himself alone.<br \/>\nHe stood upon a quiet hill and studied three headstones:<\/p>\n<p>His brother, Hoss; his father, Ben; and even Little Joe.<br \/>\nToo young, too soon, too far away&#8211;yet he\u2019d had to let them go.<br \/>\nHe bore a weight of might-have-been&#8217;s, and what-had-been, and more,<br \/>\nBecause he\u2019d felt a need to stray, to wander, to explore.<\/p>\n<p>He\u2019d left behind one family, and then he\u2019d found another &#8212;<br \/>\nA wife, a son, a distant dream had replaced his pa and brothers.<\/p>\n<p>\u201cNo,\u201d he cried into the wind; they\u2019d never been replaced.<br \/>\nThey still resided in his heart, as did this special place.<\/p>\n<p>The Ponderosa was his home, no matter where he\u2019d slept.<br \/>\nHe saw that truth. He closed his eyes. He dropped his head &#8212; and wept\u2026.<br \/>\nUntil his youngest brother\u2019s bride crooked his arm in hers<br \/>\nAnd led him gently down the hill. There was no need for words.<\/p>\n<p>They sat together for a while, beside a warming fire.<br \/>\nShe studied him and caught his eye; asked, could she please inquire,<\/p>\n<p>What it felt like to be there, in that place he\u2019d once called home?<br \/>\nHe gazed at her with gleaming eyes, and said it felt \u201calone.\u201d<br \/>\nShe shook her head; she smiled wide, and told him, \u201cNot for long!\u201d<br \/>\nAt sundown, when the work was done, he\u2019d sing a different song.<\/p>\n<p>They spent an hour catching up. They spoke of Hoss and Joe,<br \/>\nAnd other names &#8212; the younger ones he had never come to know.<\/p>\n<p>Then the sky began to darken; and the room began to fill<br \/>\nWith familiar smiles and familiar eyes. His brothers were there still,<br \/>\nIn the children and the grandchildren they\u2019d brought into this world.<br \/>\nHe found himself surrounded by Cartwright boys and girls.<\/p>\n<p>When Adam finally caught his breath, the youngest Cartwright there,<br \/>\nA girl with Joe\u2019s uncanny gaze and his curly, auburn hair,<br \/>\nPlaced her tiny hand in his and bade him, \u201cCome and see.\u201d<br \/>\nShe had to introduce him to her older brothers, three.<\/p>\n<p>The tallest one was Joseph. Eric followed next.<br \/>\nThe youngest one, with golden hair, studied him, perplexed,<br \/>\nAnd said, \u201cWe\u2019re not a bit alike.\u201d Why should we be the same?<br \/>\n\u201cBecause,\u201d the boy said, \u201cobviously, we share the Adam name.\u201d<\/p>\n<p>When the dream first came upon me, I, with Adam stood,<br \/>\nUpon the hill, beside the graves. I shared his somber mood.<br \/>\nBut as the vision conjured more, I felt his sorrow ease.<br \/>\nThe story\u2019s sure to carry on for those Cartwright brothers, three.<\/p>\n<p>XxXxX<\/p>\n<p>&nbsp;<\/p>\n<p>&nbsp;<\/p>\n<p style=\"text-align: center;\"><a href=\"https:\/\/i0.wp.com\/bonanzabrand.info\/library\/wp-content\/uploads\/2014\/04\/panorama.jpg?ssl=1\"><img data-recalc-dims=\"1\" loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" class=\"alignnone size-medium wp-image-3765 img-responsive\" src=\"https:\/\/i0.wp.com\/bonanzabrand.info\/library\/wp-content\/uploads\/2014\/04\/panorama.jpg?resize=300%2C230&#038;ssl=1\" alt=\"panorama\" width=\"300\" height=\"230\" srcset=\"https:\/\/i0.wp.com\/bonanzabrand.info\/library\/wp-content\/uploads\/2014\/04\/panorama.jpg?resize=300%2C230&amp;ssl=1 300w, https:\/\/i0.wp.com\/bonanzabrand.info\/library\/wp-content\/uploads\/2014\/04\/panorama.jpg?resize=195%2C150&amp;ssl=1 195w, https:\/\/i0.wp.com\/bonanzabrand.info\/library\/wp-content\/uploads\/2014\/04\/panorama.jpg?w=400&amp;ssl=1 400w\" sizes=\"auto, (max-width: 300px) 100vw, 300px\" \/><\/a><\/p>\n<p style=\"text-align: center;\"><strong>From Sea to Saddle<\/strong><\/p>\n<p style=\"text-align: center;\"><em>A sonnet for Adam, Shakespearean style,<br \/>\nto honor Pernell&#8217;s birthday in response to a<br \/>\nchallenge posted by Cheaux at the forums.<\/em><\/p>\n<p style=\"text-align: center;\">XxXxX<\/p>\n<p style=\"text-align: center;\">From sea to saddle, thus did it begin,<br \/>\nThis cowboy tale: a Lancelot in chaps.<br \/>\nHe rode the trails while Boston beckoned him.<br \/>\nThe creak of leather plying waves of grass,<\/p>\n<p style=\"text-align: center;\">Awoke the tempest churning in his blood,<br \/>\nBeneath his calm demeanor, hidden deep.<br \/>\nSo like a dam to hold a raging flood,<br \/>\nA sense of duty held him to his keep.<\/p>\n<p style=\"text-align: center;\">But no prison bars were those stalwart pines<br \/>\nThat stood so tall upon his father\u2019s land<br \/>\nWith roots as deep as Heaven\u2019s deepest mines.<br \/>\nHe left the chaps behind to start again.<\/p>\n<p style=\"text-align: center;\">This man in black stood loyal to the end;<br \/>\nNo better brother, nor no truer friend.<\/p>\n<p style=\"text-align: center;\">XxXxX<\/p>\n<p>&nbsp;<\/p>\n<p>&nbsp;<\/p>\n<p>&nbsp;<\/p>\n<p><em>***When letters don&#8217;t suffice, Adam drafts a poem to help Joe understand why he left.<\/em><\/p>\n<p>Story Note: This resulted from something I call &#8220;blank page writing.&#8221; I start without a plan, never quite knowing what&#8211;if anything&#8211;will emerge. This day, what emerged was a poem. And that poem just so happened to be about Bonanza, and from Adam&#8217;s POV. \ud83d\ude09<\/p>\n<p style=\"text-align: center;\">\u00a0<a href=\"https:\/\/i0.wp.com\/bonanzabrand.info\/library\/wp-content\/uploads\/2014\/04\/trio.jpg?ssl=1\"><img data-recalc-dims=\"1\" loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" class=\"alignnone size-medium wp-image-3766 img-responsive\" src=\"https:\/\/i0.wp.com\/bonanzabrand.info\/library\/wp-content\/uploads\/2014\/04\/trio.jpg?resize=300%2C202&#038;ssl=1\" alt=\"trio\" width=\"300\" height=\"202\" \/><\/a><\/p>\n<p style=\"text-align: center;\"><strong>To Joe<\/strong><\/p>\n<p style=\"text-align: center;\">XxXxX<\/p>\n<p style=\"text-align: center;\">My letters never hit the mark.<br \/>\nNot a one could state it true<br \/>\nenough to help you understand;<br \/>\nI suppose I need that, too.<\/p>\n<p style=\"text-align: center;\">The words, they lacked the depth of heart;<br \/>\nthe stirrings in my soul;<br \/>\nthe drive; the call; the wanderlust<br \/>\nthat kept me less than whole.<\/p>\n<p style=\"text-align: center;\">I left, perhaps, because I could.<br \/>\nYou\u2019d shown what you could do.<br \/>\nI like to think I had a part<br \/>\nin nurturing you through;<\/p>\n<p style=\"text-align: center;\">but the time had come to set you free<br \/>\nand to free myself, in turn.<br \/>\nAnd so I left; but not for good,<br \/>\nonly long enough to learn;<\/p>\n<p style=\"text-align: center;\">for you to find your greatest strengths,<br \/>\nwithout me holding rein;<br \/>\nfor me to see this grand, old world<br \/>\nbefore I set down roots again.<\/p>\n<p style=\"text-align: center;\">\u00a0I rode away, but never left;<br \/>\nI&#8217;ll stand by you &#8217;til the end,<br \/>\nbecause I&#8217;m proud to call you brother,<br \/>\nand even more to call you friend.<\/p>\n<p style=\"text-align: center;\">XxXxX<\/p>\n<p style=\"text-align: center;\"><!--nextpage--><\/p>\n<p><strong>Original \u2019s reviews<\/strong><\/p>\n<p><em><strong>\u00a0Ben&#8217;s Advice<\/strong><\/em><\/p>\n<p>Reviewer: JoeC Signed starstarstarstarstar<br \/>\nDate: 08 May 2012 03:11 pm Title: Ben&#8217;s Advice<\/p>\n<p>You captured all the important facts about our family in one poem, congratulation Freya. Very well written. Thanx. JoeC<\/p>\n<p><em>Author&#8217;s Response: Thank you, so much! Your review inspired me to re-read the poem, and Ben does offer some very wise advise. Easy to forget to not let the void fill us! \ud83d\ude09 I&#8217;m very glad you enjoyed this!<\/em><\/p>\n<p>Reviewer: jojay Anonymous<br \/>\nDate: 13 Jul 2011 07:42 pm Title: Ben&#8217;s Advice<\/p>\n<p>Wise words from Ben!<\/p>\n<p><em>Author&#8217;s Response: Forgive my very long delay in responding to your very kind review! Thank you for both reading &amp; reviewing! I assure you I appreciated it back when you left the review in the first place, but life gets in the way of all our best intentions, and somehow my responding got lost in the wayside! Thanks again!:)<\/em><\/p>\n<p>Reviewer: Annie K Cowgirl Signed<br \/>\nDate: 14 Apr 2011 08:50 pm Title: Ben&#8217;s Advice<\/p>\n<p>Woohoo! I L-O-V-E-D It!! Freya you have outdone yourself!!<\/p>\n<p>Reviewer: pjb Signed starstarstarstarstar<br \/>\nDate: 14 Apr 2011 04:29 pm Title: Ben&#8217;s Advice<\/p>\n<p>Beautiful, freyakendra! I especially love the line, &#8220;we must not let the voids fill us&#8221;. Wisdom worthy of Ben himself!<\/p>\n<p><em>Author&#8217;s Response: Thank you so much!<\/em><\/p>\n<p><strong>Original posting\u2019s reviews:\u00a0 <\/strong><em><strong>The Cartwright Brothers, Three<\/strong><\/em><\/p>\n<p>Reviewer: Calamity Jane Anonymous<br \/>\nDate: 24 Dec 2012 05:10 pm Title: The Cartwright Brothers, Three<\/p>\n<p>So touching! Actually started to cry, as I do with all bittersweet things.. Thank you<\/p>\n<p><em>Author&#8217;s Response: Thank you! It is bittersweet, isn&#8217;t it? I love to think of them living forever and being forever young. But there&#8217;s a certain comfort to seeing the legacy grown on, nonetheless. I started to cry, too, both when I read it and when I conceived it (in the middle of the night as I awakened from the dream of Adam on that hill).<\/em><\/p>\n<p>Reviewer: Pat Anonymous<br \/>\nDate: 21 Aug 2012 02:17 am Title: The Cartwright Brothers, Three<\/p>\n<p>I\u2019ve only just come across this beautiful poem. Beautiful words and thoughts. Had to reach for the tissues! Well done<\/p>\n<p><em>Author&#8217;s Response: Thank you so much! I&#8217;m glad it moved you so!:)<\/em><\/p>\n<p>Reviewer: Annie K Cowgirl Signed starstarstarstarstar<br \/>\nDate: 20 Nov 2011 09:19 pm Title: The Cartwright Brothers, Three<\/p>\n<p>Aww! So sad and yet so sweet! I love it freya as I do all your poetry!<\/p>\n<p><em>Author&#8217;s Response: Thank you, Annie!:)<\/em><\/p>\n<p>Reviewer: Puchi Ann Signed<br \/>\nDate: 15 Nov 2011 10:43 am Title: The Cartwright Brothers, Three<\/p>\n<p>I&#8217;ve read this before, somewhere else, but enjoyed it again today. Very nicely done. The legacy goes on.<\/p>\n<p><em>Author&#8217;s Response: Thank you!<\/em><\/p>\n<p>Reviewer: jojay Anonymous<br \/>\nDate: 13 Jul 2011 07:37 pm Title: The Cartwright Brothers, Three<\/p>\n<p>Very touching poem, thank you Freya!<\/p>\n<p><em>Author&#8217;s Response: Thank you! <\/em><\/p>\n<p>Reviewer: alhernandez1@verizon.net Anonymous starstarstarstarstar<br \/>\nDate: 22 Apr 2011 01:19 pm Title: The Cartwright Brothers, Three<\/p>\n<p>wonderful story<\/p>\n<p><em>Author&#8217;s Response: Thank you! <\/em><\/p>\n<p>Reviewer: Bonanza Girl Anonymous starstarstarstarstar<br \/>\nDate: 15 Apr 2011 11:07 pm Title: The Cartwright Brothers, Three<\/p>\n<p>Very sweet and sad poem. Glad you found it and shared it here.<\/p>\n<p><em>Author&#8217;s Response: <em>Thank you! Sweet &amp; sad, yes; but so comforting to think the spirit would live on and on. \ud83d\ude09<\/em><strong><br \/>\n<\/strong><\/em><\/p>\n<p><strong>Original posting\u2019s reviews:\u00a0\u00a0 <\/strong><em><strong>From Sea to Saddle<\/strong><\/em><\/p>\n<p>Reviewer: Cheaux Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star<br \/>\nDate: 19 Sep 2012 09:56 pm Title: Chapter 1<\/p>\n<p>Wonderful imagry, Freya.\u00a0\u00a0 My favorite line: &#8220;The creak of leather plying waves of grass.&#8221;<\/p>\n<p>Reviewer: Alley May Signed<br \/>\nDate: 28 May 2012 08:59 pm Title: Chapter 1<\/p>\n<p>&#8220;Great job on this&#8221; Pernell would be proud!<\/p>\n<p><em>Author&#8217;s Response: Thanks! Sonnets are not the easiest thing in the world to write! I&#8217;m glad you enjoyed it. \ud83d\ude09<\/em><strong><strong><br \/>\n<\/strong><\/strong><\/p>\n<p><strong>\u00a0Original posting&#8217;s reviews:<\/strong><em><strong> To Joe:<\/strong><\/em><\/p>\n<p>Reviewer: faust Signed<br \/>\nDate: 03 Sep 2013 08:58 am Title: To Joe<\/p>\n<p>I&#8217;m envious at what you can do with words.(And without even intending it!)<\/p>\n<p>Great sentiments, just as subdued and moderate as Adam would write them.<\/p>\n<p><em>Author&#8217;s Response:\u00a0 Thank you! I just saw this review from you&#8230;fortunately not all THAT far after you posted it, too! \ud83d\ude09 (I sure wish I could get the email notification to work again, but&#8230;) I&#8217;m especially glad you found these sentiments to fit Adam&#8217;s mindset! \ud83d\ude42<\/em><\/p>\n<p>Reviewer: Puchi Ann Signed<br \/>\nDate: 30 Aug 2013 09:01 pm Title: To Joe<\/p>\n<p>Love it; love it; love it!!! The emotions ring so true. It is an explanation I think that Joe could understand and accept, though still with a measure of regret. Well done!<\/p>\n<p><em>Author&#8217;s Response: Thank you so much! I&#8217;m thrilled you thrice love it! \ud83d\ude00<\/em><\/p>\n<p>Reviewer: Beej Anonymous starstarstarstarstar<br \/>\nDate: 27 Aug 2013 10:09 am Title: To Joe<\/p>\n<p>Sorry, too lazy to sign in. You may love Joe best, but you really have a wonderful way of crawling into Adam&#8217;s head. This is lovely, thank you.<\/p>\n<p><em>\u00a0Author&#8217;s Response: Nothing wrong with being lazy, especially when you still invest time in providing feedback! Thank you very much! I love crawling into all their heads from time to time! \ud83d\ude09 I&#8217;m glad you find it works!<\/em><\/p>\n<p>Reviewer: BluewindFarm Signed<br \/>\nDate: 26 Aug 2013 02:09 pm Title: To Joe<\/p>\n<p>WOW! The power of the pen is mightier than the sword (or the spoken word). Such words are more easily conveyed via pen to paper than could be said face to face.<\/p>\n<p><em>Author&#8217;s Response: I know for me that&#8217;s true. I can never find sufficient words face to face. Even writing a letter works poorly. I write a lot of words, but fail to convey what I really want to say. 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