Deborah Wilde (by Krystyna)

Reviewer: pjhomerak Anonymous
Date: 28 Jan 2012 03:56 am Title: Chapter 1

Another treasure found 🙂  Amazing twisting story exploring the depths of mental illness and the ways everyone in a family is affected.  I was so gratified that Jenny had such a wonderful outcome.  Poor Hoss, skunked again with the girl.  Adam has just the right touch with him, though, so he’ll recover.  Had to laugh about the cake fiasco!  Poor tummy ache.  Nice touch of comedy there.  I could just hear Clementine shrieking and Adam losing his composure and his excess of cake at the same time under Roy’s scrutiny.  Ben was the winner, though, finding the picture of his special place with Marie.  That picture will last, as nothing else will.  Thank you!

Author’s Response: Thank you so much, pjhomerak, really pleased you saw the depths of the story re the difficult situation the family had to contend with, and poor Adam with too much cake, plus Hoss losing out as usual to Joe…yes, I noticed a landscape picture on the wall in the ‘big room’ during the eps and pretended it was that one. Thanks again, much appreciate your review. Krystyna

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Reviewer: bahj Signed
Date: 14 Jan 2012 04:06 pm Title: Chapter 1

Good story, Krystyna. I found the competition between the two brothers at the beginning very amusing. Of course, it wasn’t so funny after Hoss got his heart broken…sigh. You kept me guessing the whole time about what was going to happen. I like the way things ended up for Jamie and Jenny. Thanks for taking the time to write :0)

Author’s Response: Hi Bahj, always a pleasure to write about this family, and I love when the brothers have a bit of banter between them going on. Glad you enjoyed this story, Bahj, I thought so many had an idea that there was something wrong with Abigail that I didn’t like to disappoint them LOL. THank you so much for the review. Krystyna

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Reviewer: Jen Anonymous
Date: 13 Jan 2012 05:49 pm Title: Chapter 1

I really enjoyed this story!

Author’s Response: Hi Jen, I’m really pleased that you did, thank you very much indeed for coming by and leaving a review for me. Krystyna

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Reviewer: slaine89 Signed
Date: 10 Jan 2012 11:12 pm Title: Chapter 1

Once again, I thoroughly enjoyed this story. The movement of the plot was very well done, it gently eased the reader in and then swept them away. Also I enjoyed the dynamics of your characters, especially Deborah, who was quite the girl. Great job making there something about her seemed a little off, but still managing the big surprise at the end. Thanks for a good read!

Author’s Response: slaine89, I’ve really enjoyed reading your comments throughout the posting of this story, and so very glad that you liked it so much. The ending changed as the story developed here because of your input, it seemed so much better to have Deborah more addlepated than anyone else in the family than the original ending. Thanks again, so much. Krystyna

 

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Author: Krystyna

1 thought on “Deborah Wilde (by Krystyna)

  1. Wow! What a great story! You depicted each of the Cartwrights just as we came to know them through Bonanza.
    I am glad Adam was not interested Deborah. Instead you showed his kindness to the family. Well done.

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