Like a Phoenix Rising #1 (by Krystyna)

Reviewer: JoeC Signed
Date: 27 Nov 2012 01:55 pm Title: Chapter 1

Very good story. I liked it how you described the Cartwright family. There is so much love and understanding. The last line could be the title for a new story. *HINT, HINT*. Thanx. JoeC

Author’s Response: This is such a lovely review, thank you so very much JoeC. Sometimes the advantage of writing in the first person singular is that there is a greater opportunity to explore the characters and expand on them from the narrators p.o.v. I am just so pleased you liked it, JoeC. thank you for letting me know. Krystyna

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Reviewer: Laurie Anonymous
Date: 26 Nov 2012 08:43 pm Title: Chapter 1

Very good story Krystyna! I love the last line, THANKS

Author’s Response: Hi Laurie, thank you for the great review for this story, I am so very glad you liked it and yes, that last line means a lot doesn’t it? Krystyna

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Reviewer: Snuffybear Anonymous
Date: 26 Nov 2012 07:53 pm Title: Chapter 1

Wow-this story was an incredible roller coaster of emotion. I loved the way you unfurled Abbie’s life story. She really is a phoenix.

Author’s Response: Hi Snuffybear, what a lovely review but you’re right, Abbie did go through such a roller coaster of a life, but having found the Cartwrights I think she’s well settled now.. Thank you again very much. Krystyna

 

Author: Krystyna

2 thoughts on “Like a Phoenix Rising #1 (by Krystyna)

    1. Thank you so much, dmc, really appreciated that you re-read this story about Abbie, and for your review…

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