Reviewer: bahj Signed
Date: 08 Apr 2013 06:10 pm Title: Chapter 1
Goodness, the poor Cartwrights risked their lives just stepping inside for a cool drink. I’m glad it was Adam that bumped Tim instead of Little Joe–that saloon would probably never be the same, Lol. Thank you for sharing this story, Krystynaw :0)
Author’s Response: Ouf, could you imagine it? Not much left of Tim either I should imagine….thankyou, Bahj, so pleased you enjoyed this short story. Krystyna
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Reviewer: Beej Signed
Date: 08 Apr 2013 08:33 am Title: Chapter 1
You know our Adam so well… and I loved peeking into Ben’s thoughts. He does have three fine boys. Hopefully Tim sleeps it off and wakes up in a better mood!
Author’s Response: Oh yes, I hope Tim does as well, after all, he can’t go around threatening people like that, can he? Glad you enjoyed this little story, Beej. Thank you again for such a lovely review. Krystyna
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Reviewer: Chavel47 Anonymous
Date: 07 Apr 2013 08:54 pm Title: Chapter 1
Another good story of Adam and what makes Adam tic.
Author’s Response: Thank you so much, Chavel47, more than pleased that you enjoyed this wee story….Krystyna
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Reviewer: Snuffybear Anonymous
Date: 07 Apr 2013 07:15 pm Title: Chapter 1
I love the cool, calm Adam. I wonder, was he nervous but just not showing it.
Author’s Response: Hi Marion, mmmm, well, in answer to your query I’m not saying a word unless Adam allows me too….so mmm mmm again. Thank you so very much… Krystyna
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Reviewer: debpet Signed
Date: 07 Apr 2013 07:14 pm Title: Chapter 1
No matter how things turned out I’m sure Ben was nervous about what could happen. Adam’s impressive coolness in this case seems to be based on his knowledge of the man he’s dealing with. I do feel kind of sorry for Tim though. He seems to be having a rough time of it. Another enjoyable read from you.
Author’s Response: It just wasn’t Tim’s day was it, poor chap, and he picked the wrong man to fight a duel with that’s for sure. Glad you enjoyed this one, Debpet. Krystyna
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Reviewer: BettyHT Signed
Date: 07 Apr 2013 06:49 pm Title: Chapter 1
So cool under pressure it makes Joe nervous = lol. Great little story of a foray into town.
Author’s Response: Oh thank you so much, Betty…loved your reference to Joe, yep, he was kinda nervous wasn’t he? L.O.L. So glad you enjoyed this little story. Krystyna
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Reviewer: BluewindFarm Signed
Date: 07 Apr 2013 05:56 pm Title: Chapter 1
Unable to hit the barn door??? I think his aim was pretty good…all things considered. The final moments were a hoot!! I can envision Adam asking his question, see Hoss wide-eyed and shocked that his brother asked the question, and hear Joe cackling at the expression on Ben’s face!
Never take anything at face value. Adam sized him up just PERFECTLY!
Author’s Response: Oh just love the review, BWF, thank you so much. It is such fun to imagine the expressions on everyone’s faces as one writes … and you saw each perfectly, thank you so much. Krystyna
A quiet ending to what could have been a violent event. Got to love how fate intervenes.
Good to hear from you, wx4rmk….and so glad you enjoyed this little story. Thank you for leaving a review for it, K.
Love how the situation resolved itself
Many thanks for taking time out to read this little story…it was just for fun so more than happy that you enjoyed it. K.
That was a fun story. I liked the way Ben took the moment to ponder each of his sons, and with the check of nerves at the end, we could tell whose nerves were jangled.
Goodness me, I did not see this comment before, but thank you so much… this was a fun story to write so I am glad you enjoyed it….K.
Good one, short but good.
So sorry I did not pick up on this previously, but thank you..yes, sometimes better short and sweet….it was fun to write.