Reviewer: Jayne Signed
Date: 24 Nov 2013 11:02 am Title: Fraternity Great story! Very suspenseful, and I loved the brotherly banter :)*
Date: 24 Nov 2013 11:02 am Title: Fraternity Great story! Very suspenseful, and I loved the brotherly banter :)*
Reviewer: Beej Signed 
Date: 20 Jul 2012 12:08 pm Title: Fraternity I’m spending a rainy day in the library and stumbled onto this story. I can’t believe I missed it! :)Poor Adam, the one time he decides to take a break… Those scorpions are nasty little critters! We had them everywhere when we lived in Vegas. (I actually caught one and made him into a paper weight. After he was dead of course!)Well done Patina!*
Date: 20 Jul 2012 12:08 pm Title: Fraternity I’m spending a rainy day in the library and stumbled onto this story. I can’t believe I missed it! :)Poor Adam, the one time he decides to take a break… Those scorpions are nasty little critters! We had them everywhere when we lived in Vegas. (I actually caught one and made him into a paper weight. After he was dead of course!)Well done Patina!*
Reviewer: jojay Anonymous
Date: 30 Oct 2010 07:26 pm Title: Fraternity Well done story, thanks!
Author’s Response:Thank you for letting me know, jojay!
Date: 30 Oct 2010 07:26 pm Title: Fraternity Well done story, thanks!
Author’s Response:Thank you for letting me know, jojay!
Not every family is as tightly knit as the Cartwrights, for certain. Just goes to show that things can always get worse. Or wait …. was that not the moral of the story? ?
Thanks for writing!
Great story really enjoyed it and i love your authors note at the end . Very interesting . ?
Thank you, Joesgal. I’m glad to know you enjoyed this story. Research made me glad I don’t have to worry much about scorpions in my part of the country.