Reviewer: Cheaux Signed
Date: 23 Jan 2011 11:33 pm Title: Chapter 1 Nice story. Loved the ending banter between Joe and Adam.Author’s Response:Thank you, Cheaux. Maybe Hoss and Joe will outsmart Adam someday.*
Date: 23 Jan 2011 11:33 pm Title: Chapter 1 Nice story. Loved the ending banter between Joe and Adam.Author’s Response:Thank you, Cheaux. Maybe Hoss and Joe will outsmart Adam someday.*
Reviewer: mumu74 Signed
Date: 09 Sep 2010 11:17 am Title: Chapter 1 that’s a fantastic story… I have appreciated, suspense; fear and love between the brothers…And question of Ben about the way he raises his sons… Well done, a very lovely story….Author’s Response:Merci beaucoup, mumu! I’m so pleased to know you enjoyed this story.*
Date: 09 Sep 2010 11:17 am Title: Chapter 1 that’s a fantastic story… I have appreciated, suspense; fear and love between the brothers…And question of Ben about the way he raises his sons… Well done, a very lovely story….Author’s Response:Merci beaucoup, mumu! I’m so pleased to know you enjoyed this story.*
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous
Date: 06 Jul 2010 11:35 am Title: Chapter 1 I love your stories.Author’s Response:Thank you!*
Date: 06 Jul 2010 11:35 am Title: Chapter 1 I love your stories.Author’s Response:Thank you!*
Reviewer: acspeej Anonymous 
Date: 10 Nov 2007 02:37 pm Title: Chapter 1 Excellent dialogue! The conversation flows beautifully! And Joe’s parting shot at Adam is wonderful! Fun reading!PeejAuthor’s Response: Thank you, Peej! Joe just had to get in the last word. You didn’t really think he could keep his promise, do you? (lol) I’m glad you enjoyed this story.
Date: 10 Nov 2007 02:37 pm Title: Chapter 1 Excellent dialogue! The conversation flows beautifully! And Joe’s parting shot at Adam is wonderful! Fun reading!PeejAuthor’s Response: Thank you, Peej! Joe just had to get in the last word. You didn’t really think he could keep his promise, do you? (lol) I’m glad you enjoyed this story.
This was an enjoyable story with an important lesson for Joe to learn. He definitely matured a little bit by the end of the story.
This is such a lovely story.
What loving story. I love how Pa is such a mother hen when it comes to his boys. He loves those boys so much. One almost feel the great love Pa has for his sons. Pa is so cute with Adam. maybe now Adam see what it is like to be spoiled . Thanks
Lol oh how they love each other , very nicely written ?
Thank you, Joesgal, for letting me know you enjoyed this story.