Reviewer: BluewindFarm Signed
Date: 13 Oct 2013 05:09 pm Title: The Echo of a HeartbeatIf only she had known… if only they had known. A very good story summing up her loss and how it could have been.*
Date: 13 Oct 2013 05:09 pm Title: The Echo of a HeartbeatIf only she had known… if only they had known. A very good story summing up her loss and how it could have been.*
Reviewer: adamsgurl Anonymous 
Date: 20 Jun 2010 10:00 pm Title: The Echo of a Heartbeatsad and bittersweet. i liked it. Thanks for the time and effort:)Author’s Response:Thank you, adamsgurl. I’m pleased to know you enjoyed Marie’s thoughts.*
Date: 20 Jun 2010 10:00 pm Title: The Echo of a Heartbeatsad and bittersweet. i liked it. Thanks for the time and effort:)Author’s Response:Thank you, adamsgurl. I’m pleased to know you enjoyed Marie’s thoughts.*
Reviewer: jojay Anonymous
Date: 14 May 2010 07:21 am Title: The Echo of a HeartbeatFour little rascals would have been interesting. Thanks Patina!Author’s Response:Thank you, jojay. Clay sure would’ve been an entertaining addition to the Ponderosa.
Date: 14 May 2010 07:21 am Title: The Echo of a HeartbeatFour little rascals would have been interesting. Thanks Patina!Author’s Response:Thank you, jojay. Clay sure would’ve been an entertaining addition to the Ponderosa.
Reviewer: jfclover Signed
Date: 10 May 2010 01:33 pm Title: The Echo of a HeartbeatNice job p!Don’t think Hop Sing was thrilled when they got home LOLPatAuthor’s Response:Thank you, Pat. Hop Sing probably threatened to go back to China the moment he saw the boys’ mud-streaked clothes (lol).
Date: 10 May 2010 01:33 pm Title: The Echo of a HeartbeatNice job p!Don’t think Hop Sing was thrilled when they got home LOLPatAuthor’s Response:Thank you, Pat. Hop Sing probably threatened to go back to China the moment he saw the boys’ mud-streaked clothes (lol).
Oh this is beautiful!! I love stories that get in the character’s minds like this-it makes me feel like I’m really getting to know them. 😊
This is an interesting story. Thanks
Bittersweet musings for Marie — one does wonder. I’m sure she’s right, and Adam would have welcomed a new little brother. He may have even more easily accepted her, who knows. I could feel the longing in her heart for that other little boy … such a sad thing that events unfolded as they did.
Very nice…thx so much for writing.
Enjoyed the day at the lake and Marie’s reflections on what could have been if Clay “had survived” (and we know he did). One wonders how Clay would have turned out if he hadn’t been taken away from his mother.
Thank you, Ruth.
A perfect day at the lake; even if longing took one back in time to what could have been. Thank you for dreaming and sharing.
Thank you, BWF. I’m glad to know you enjoyed it.