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Tense times indeed. At least it sounds like all that thinking Adam is doing is starting to take effect.
The moment he called her “souillon” – filth, slut – I’m surprised Adam wasn’t punished much more severely!
Un récit qui met tout le monde au pied du mur. La vie sauvage sur le Pondérosa frappe toute la famille. Chacun y trouve son compte en réflexions.
J’aime entendre dire que Adam est comme un homme de 50 ans dans un corps de garçon. Par contre les punitions sont dures, devoir rester sur son lit à réfléchir :
Adam est’ il destiné à devenir un contemplatif ? 😉
This was a real nice story. Adam has a lot of adjustments to make. Liked this story. Thanks
I agree with Questfan about the conclusion–hilarious, precious and perfect–and I, too, was pleased to see Adam begin to see Marie as person deserving of fair judgement, rather than outright rejection, just for being there.
Thank you for reading, Questfan. I’m glad to know you enjoyed the story.
I love the Hoss system and the last bit made me laugh. I’m glad something is shifting for Adam in his thinking.