With This Ring (by Patina)

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Reviewer: Cheaux Signed

Date: 26 May 2012 12:49 pm Title: With This RingJust found this story and am so glad I did. Hearing Joe’s thoughts throughout was great . . . I loved his meandering mind and Adam’s firm, but gentle and comforting presence. Nice.*

Reviewer: jojay Anonymous
Date: 28 Dec 2009 01:44 pm Title: With This RingYou couldn’t tell till the end, nicely done.Author’s Response:Thank you, jojay!*

Reviewer: TT Anonymous

Date: 28 Nov 2008 08:25 pm Title: With This RingI loved how you drew out the climax! One question, how old is Joe supposed to be? It was a very well written story though, good job.Author’s Response:Thank you, TT. Joe is 10/11 when this story takes place.

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10 thoughts on “With This Ring (by Patina)”

Loved all the internal emotions and thoughts going through Joe’s head. That twist at the end, though, through me for a loop!

I love the mystery of who the groom and bride were until almost the end.

I was wondering who was getting married. Nice to see a wedding from a Cartwright perspective.

patina says:

July 30, 2017 at 2:07 pm

Glad you enjoyed it, Ruth.

I just finished watching ”The Dark Gate” episode, a truly heartbreaking and touching episode, and I wanted to see if there were any stories that were partners to it. Your story is simply lovely, I loved your description of their wedding and having it from Joe’s perspective was a nice and pleasantly confusing touch! Wonderful job!!

patina says:

September 27, 2015 at 1:33 pm

Thank you for reading, MissKitty4Adam! Watching “Dark Gate” always leaves me wondering what the happy times were like for Ross and Delphine. I’m glad to know you enjoyed the point-of-view I chose.

Wonderful descriptions that tell so much , or do they? Great work!

patina says:

December 31, 2014 at 4:43 pm

Thank you, jojay! I’m glad you enjoyed this story!

Thank you, mumu. I’m glad you enjoyed it!

very funny, I didn’t expect that end… I really appreciated the description. Good job

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