Reviewer: Cheaux Signed 
Date: 26 May 2012 12:49 pm Title: With This RingJust found this story and am so glad I did. Hearing Joe’s thoughts throughout was great . . . I loved his meandering mind and Adam’s firm, but gentle and comforting presence. Nice.*
Date: 26 May 2012 12:49 pm Title: With This RingJust found this story and am so glad I did. Hearing Joe’s thoughts throughout was great . . . I loved his meandering mind and Adam’s firm, but gentle and comforting presence. Nice.*
Reviewer: jojay Anonymous
Date: 28 Dec 2009 01:44 pm Title: With This RingYou couldn’t tell till the end, nicely done.Author’s Response:Thank you, jojay!*
Date: 28 Dec 2009 01:44 pm Title: With This RingYou couldn’t tell till the end, nicely done.Author’s Response:Thank you, jojay!*
Reviewer: TT Anonymous
Date: 28 Nov 2008 08:25 pm Title: With This RingI loved how you drew out the climax! One question, how old is Joe supposed to be? It was a very well written story though, good job.Author’s Response:Thank you, TT. Joe is 10/11 when this story takes place.
Date: 28 Nov 2008 08:25 pm Title: With This RingI loved how you drew out the climax! One question, how old is Joe supposed to be? It was a very well written story though, good job.Author’s Response:Thank you, TT. Joe is 10/11 when this story takes place.
Loved all the internal emotions and thoughts going through Joe’s head. That twist at the end, though, through me for a loop!
I love the mystery of who the groom and bride were until almost the end.
I was wondering who was getting married. Nice to see a wedding from a Cartwright perspective.
Glad you enjoyed it, Ruth.
I just finished watching ”The Dark Gate” episode, a truly heartbreaking and touching episode, and I wanted to see if there were any stories that were partners to it. Your story is simply lovely, I loved your description of their wedding and having it from Joe’s perspective was a nice and pleasantly confusing touch! Wonderful job!!
Thank you for reading, MissKitty4Adam! Watching “Dark Gate” always leaves me wondering what the happy times were like for Ross and Delphine. I’m glad to know you enjoyed the point-of-view I chose.
Wonderful descriptions that tell so much , or do they? Great work!
Thank you, jojay! I’m glad you enjoyed this story!
Thank you, mumu. I’m glad you enjoyed it!
very funny, I didn’t expect that end… I really appreciated the description. Good job