Reviewer: BluewindFarm Signed
Date: 31 Oct 2012 04:45 pm Title: Chapter 1
The story you wove was a masterpiece of suspense and sorrow. I loved how with all that Adam was going through, you could still put in a snippet of Little Joe and life on the Ponderosa to lighten the mood, before the darkness descended again.
The story was crafted well enough to give more insight into the man Adam Cartwright would become, and why.
Author’s Response: Bluewindfarm …. thank you so much for taking time to read and review this story which I just loved writing. I still think Eli one of the most evil of my villains to date … thank you for such an encouraging and motivating review,Krystyna
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Reviewer: jojay Anonymous
Date: 13 Aug 2011 08:50 pm Title: Chapter 1
Well written epic, a litttle bit of everything. Thanks!
Author’s Response: Thank you very much indeed for taking time out to read this story and leave a review, Jojay. Really appreciate it. Krystyna
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Reviewer: zaphod22 Anonymous
Date: 13 Jul 2011 07:19 am Title: Chapter 1
Thank you so much for posting this wonderful story here Krystyna. I always enjoy reading about Ben’s past with Elizabeth. Eli was an evil character, yet at the same time I felt some pitty for him, at least in the first half of the story. An excellent all around story that is worth re-reading.
Sabina
Author’s Response: Hi Sabina, many thanks for this review on one of my favourite prequels. Yes Eli was a pitiful creature initially but then degenerated to miserable depths. I really appreciated your input. By co-incidence I’ve just watched Hitchhiker’s Guide to the Galaxy and got a chuckle at seeing your user name … I’m presuming its from one of the characters there? Great. Krystyna
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Thank you Jackie, this is a late response as I have just found it. But thank you so much for reading and letting me know your opinion on the story.,
Good story, but I like to believe Adam went back East when Abel got too old to take care of himself. In my view, Adam took care of Abel in his last years and continued to live in Boston after Abel’s death.