On a Wedding Day (by Krystyna)

Reviewer: jfclover Signed
Date: 27 Oct 2013 07:17 pm Title: Chapter 1

Neat little story, Krystyna.  You came up in the ramdom read, so I had dinner and read about Laura and Will.  Never my favorite couple, but you wrote interesting little snippets into their lives.  Well done!

 

Author: Krystyna

4 thoughts on “On a Wedding Day (by Krystyna)”

  1. I enjoyed how you compared those two particular ladies to each other! You really spoke the truth about them. Until now, I hadn’t even thought about that. To answer AC, yes, Laura married the right Cartwright and vice versa. They were tailor-made for each other. I look at Laura, Aunt Lil and Peggy and realize the family was all cut from the same cloth!

    1. Great comment ..thank you so.much. it was fun to write and put everyones feelings “out there” …glad you enjoyed it too

  2. Yes, well, I really wanted to ‘play’ around with this story,,,escape the usual brief and delve into people’s true feelings on this particular wedding day …thanks AC! Great review …

  3. What an interesting topic to base a story on. There were certainly as many opinions as they were people as to whether Laura married the right Cartwright. I enjoyed the study of their thoughts and feelings. The ending especially gave me pause. I felt it natural that Laura might have those thoughts, and perhaps someone else, also.

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