Summary: When little Joe and Marie are home alone for the day, little Joe helps her realize one very important fact.
Rated: K (1,930 words)
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Summary: When little Joe and Marie are home alone for the day, little Joe helps her realize one very important fact.
Rated: K (1,930 words)
Story Notes:
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This was an adorable story! I love getting a peek at the Cartwrights life before the show started. Little Joe definitely has wisdom well beyond his age.
I have listed some helpful advice below. A beta will be able to proofread your stories. Please be aware of run-on sentences and the placement of commas vs. colons or semi-colons and the usage of the nominative case vs. the objective case.
Case in point: “As the day persisted on, her and Little Joe… for naps.” It should read: “she and Little Joe.” Keep writing. I enjoyed the short story.
Excellent. I love stories about Joe. The stories about a very young Joe are precious and priceless. Please keep writing. I enjoyed this very much!
Thank you so much for a wonderful story. I enjoyed it very much.
This is a very nice story. Liked it very much. Continue your good writing. You did well.