A Tangled Web (by Patina)

Reviewer: Beej Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Jun 2012 11:15 am Title: Chapter 1 I’ve been looking for this since the episode aired the other day. (I couldn’t remember the title!) You really put poor Adam through the wringer in this one but it seems all ended well. (I think the witches deserved  the “Eye for an Eye” treatment but maybe that’s just me.) ;)Good story, Patina, I’m glad I could track it down and read it again.*
Reviewer: mohegan Anonymous starstarstarstar
Date: 14 Apr 2011 12:13 am Title: Chapter 1 This was an interesting variation on the original episode, and I was quite surprised at the turns it took.  Felt like the “ladies” got off pretty easily, considering all the physical and mental damage they caused.  Thanks for writing!Author’s Response:Thank you, mohegan.  The Banning women certainly got off easy, didn’t they?  I’m sure Ben was happy to see them leave.  I’m pleased to know you enjoyed this story.*
Reviewer: katie Signed
Date: 19 Mar 2010 06:21 am Title: Chapter 1 Good story. I’m glad Joe found out about Melinda before it was too late. Nice twist to the story.Author’s Response:Thank you, katie.*
Reviewer: Trinity Anonymous
Date: 09 Feb 2010 08:35 am Title: Chapter 1 This was a touching story. I almost cried! (and that says a lot) You are a wonderful author!Author’s Response:Thank you, Trinity!  I’m thrilled to know you enjoyed this story!*
Reviewer: moira4eku Signed
Date: 30 Jul 2008 03:02 pm Title: Chapter 1That was a good WHN or AU of that ep. I’ve even wonder what would have happened if they did marry! Yikes. You did an excellent job of conflict between Joe and Adam. Great story!Author’s Response: Thank you, moira4eku!  I’ve never liked how Adam suddenly decided to go off to Tucson after being seen kissing Melinda at the forge.  I’m so pleased to know you enjoyed my version of this episode!

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Reviewer: Marianne Anonymous starstarstarstarstar
Date: 22 Jun 2008 04:03 pm Title: Chapter 1Thanks for a very well written story.Author’s Response: Thank you, Marianne.  I’m glad to know you enjoyed this story.

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Reviewer: Kelly Anonymous starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21 Apr 2008 02:04 pm Title: Chapter 1loved itAuthor’s Response: Thank you for letting me know, Kelly.

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Reviewer: pony Anonymous starstarstarstar
Date: 09 Mar 2008 07:29 pm Title: Chapter 1This is a great example of a “What Happened Instead” that is better than the original “What Really Happened!” Melinda and Deborah got away much too lightly in the original episode so I think we’re all glad to see them getting their true reward in your version, patina.Author’s Response: Thank you so much, pony!  Deborah probably deserved something harsher than what I gave her, though.  I’m so pleased to know you enjoyed my version of this episode!!

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Reviewer: Kusiner Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 09 Dec 2007 03:36 pm Title: Chapter 1 It was interesting to read this story again.JudyAuthor’s Response: Thank you, Judy!! I’m glad you enjoyed re-reading this story.

Author: patina

I'm a historical archaeologist who loves westerns and Bonanza is my favorite. I wrote my first Bonanza story in 2006 and the plot bunnies are still hopping. The majority of my stories include the entire family and many are prequels set during the period when Ben and Marie were married.

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