Death Valley – Complete Story (by MonicaSJ)

Chapter Twenty-Four

Ben, Hoss and two ranch hands had ridden hard to arrive in Aurora the evening of their fourth day on the trail. Adam had mentioned in his telegram to speak to the bartender; that the bartender could give them more information than anyone else in town. The four men walked into the saloon and up to the bar.

“What’ll it be for you fellas?”

“Four beers,” said Ben. When the beers arrived, Ben leaned forward toward the bartender. “I’m looking for my son. He was here a little while ago looking for a guide by the name of Mike Dutton.”

The bartender looked around the saloon, and seeing that it was almost empty, leaned forward. “Mister, people come in here all the time lookin’ for Mike. After awhile, they all start lookin’ alike.”

Ben pulled a stack of coins from his pocket and began shuffling them, letting them bounce in his hand. “My son told me he was going into Death Valley with this guide. Does that sound familiar?”

“Did your son dress in black?” Ben nodded. “He left over a week ago, Mister, but there’s no one here that will track him for you. He went lookin’ for the Shoshoni and the Aha macave. The Army knows he’s there, and they’re lookin’ for him.”

“Oh? What happens when they find him?”

The bartender leaned close, looking around again before he answered. “If he’s alone, he’ll end up in the lead mines like his brother. If he’s with Mike, he’ll still end up in the mines, and Mike, well, they’ll do some pretty awful things to Mike before they take her to the reservation. If they’re with the Indians, there will be a small war. The Army outnumbers the Indians ten to one. It won’t last very long.”

“Her?” asked Ben, alarmed. “He hired a guide named Mike Dutton.”

“That’d be a she, Mister. She’s part white, part Shoshoni and part Mojave. And she’s real important to the Army. She’s been taking medicine in to the Indians. They’re just waitin’ for her and her Indians to attack the mines to get your missing son back.”

Ben turned to Hoss, “Adam doesn’t know they’re walking into a trap. Is there a guide that knows that area that can maybe draw a map?” Ben asked the bartender.

The bartender thought. “Maybe. You gentlemen take a seat. I’ll send someone after him.”

While they waited, Ben pulled out a piece of paper and a pencil. “What’s that, Pa,” asked Hoss.

“I’ll ask the bartender to send this telegram tomorrow to Colonel Adamson in San Francisco. They won’t be here in time to help us, but they will eventually get here and hopefully close those lead mines down. If the Army here is involved, we can’t trust any of ‘em.”

Author: MonicaSJ

I'm an Primary Software Engineer who writes technical manuals and was talked into writing fan fiction. I love all things outdoors, including my horses. I also love that I live in the mythical Cartwright stomping grounds and roam all the way from Virginia City to San Francisco looking for old roads, ghost towns and stagecoach stops. My favorite pastime is taking a 'no technology' weekend on horseback with a pack horse into the area around Lake Tahoe and the Desolation Wilderness. I do, however, take a GPS with me, so I don't get lost.

9 thoughts on “Death Valley – Complete Story (by MonicaSJ)

  1. This is my favorite Bonanza story!! You did a terrific job of writing and telling a story that kept me on the edge of my seat…..I couldn’t put it down. Honest!! Thank you! Keep up the great work!!

    1. Sorry this took so long, Annie. I’ve been working on a big (and bad) project since last year and have just now finished! I’m so happy you enjoyed Death Valley. That story has a special place in my heart. It was more than a story for me…more like a journey. My husband and I went to Death Valley several times, to the reservations, to Furnace Creek, to Aurora (there’s nothing left but some old crumbled rock foundations, a piece of a stamp mill, and the back of the bank building. We went to the Aha Macave spirit mountain, Avi kwame to see the petroglyphs. It was an experience.

      I’m so glad you enjoyed it.

      Thank you, Annie.

    1. Thank you, milliea. This one turned out to be very exciting to write. I got to meet some nice people and have a completely new mind’s view of Death Valley because of it.

      Monica

    1. Thank you, Larkspur. The trip to Death Valley (one of many since) to research this was incredible. It’s one of my favorite places, besides Tahoe. I’m lucky to live in the middle of everything Bonanza!

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