Charlottesville, VA – Past
Adam wandered around the expansive marketplace with a few of his classmates for an hour or so before they went their separate ways. The local college students often visited the mostly slave run market during the weekends in summer. Though he wasn’t considered a local, Adam had spent every summer for the last three years on the Charlottesville campus. The long distance and cost of traveling had nearly made him into a permanent resident, only ever escaping at the invite of a friend, or occasionally, one of his professors.
In spite of the fact that he’d mailed a letter home just the day before, he found a spot in the shade, far enough away from the din to concentrate, but close enough to keep watch, and pulled out a clean sheet of paper. He was homesick, more so than he could ever remember being before, and his frequent letters of late proved it, even though he courageously tried to deny it.
He was well into his third paragraph on both the glories and despairs of being a university law student when a commotion at the nearest fruit stand caught his attention.
“You either pay for them cherries or you put ‘em back, ya hear me?”
Adam watched as a burly, colored woman spoke up to a slender, white girl who appeared to be about his age, maybe a little younger. The girl’s cheeks turned scarlet and she took a step back, though she didn’t release the basket of cherries. “I, I’m . . .”
A crowd began to gather, and Adam didn’t miss the look of panic on the girl’s face. Jumping to his feet, he dug into his pocket for the few coins he’d brought along with him. “Here it is,” he called, waving his hand in the air as he approached. “I’m sorry I took so long.” Stepping up beside the girl and casually taking her arm, he gave her a smile and then handed over the money for the fruit. “That should about cover it, I think.”
The colored women checked the coins in her hand and, seeming satisfied, returned to her cart. The girl glanced around anxiously until the crowd dissipated. “I, I have to go,” she said, then turned and quickly made her way toward one of the side streets.
“Wait a minute,” Adam called, running to catch up with her. “Hey,” he said, putting a hand on her arm. She stopped, but kept her eyes on the ground. “I know I pretended to know you back there, but we haven’t actually been introduced. My name’s Adam Cartwright.”
The girl stammered for a moment, twisting her hands around the handle of her basket. “My name is, it’s . . .”
Adam could barely hear her as a noisy cart rolled by. “I’m sorry,” he said, “did you say your name is Sissy?”
The girl looked up for the first time and met his eyes; for a moment she seemed to study him. He smiled at her and nervously reached out for some of the cherries. He stuffed them in his mouth and then chuckled as he wiped the trickling juice from his chin. He was glad to see her shoulders relax and the corners of her mouth turn up. “Yeah,” she answered. “You can call me Sissy.”
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Bahj,
This is simply exquisite. It is heartwarming, poignant, and
full of hope and promise. If you decide to write a sequel, I would love to read it even though my favorite character is LJ.
This was a great story. So intense. LotG of pain and grief and a nice ending. I was Glad Sissy and Meg got back together in the end. Good always conquers over evil in the end. Thanks
This story touched my heart, and you wove it seamlessly into the tapestry that is the Cartwright family. A beautiful story of love and redemption, disappointed hopes and hearts torn and broken, only to be mended again by unbreakable love and devotion.
Beautiful.
What a wonderful, multi-layered absolutely gorgeous story. It moved me to tears more than once. Thank you for this. 🙂
Bahj, I read this magnificent story last night and was moved to tears at least a couple of times. The art of accurately portraying our favorite character, Adam Cartwright, is tricky to say the least but you have passed the test with your colors flying!!! I particularly enjoyed the fact that when he found out about Sissy’s past that he showed his great love by marrying her on the spot, without hesitation. I could feel the sweet love emanating from them both throughout the story and also I loved the fact that Meg had filled Tag’s ears with the truth about his long lost parents. That part was so pleasant to read when he met them for the first time! Tag behaved as I feel Adam would have at 15, calm and easy going without that exploding anger that Little Joe always seemed to have festering toward Adam when Little Joe is that age.
Suffice as to say, I desperately want a sequel(s)!! I’ll be checking on your author category for new stories you post, thank you so much for your talent!!!!!
This was a different story in it’s order of things, but it was very good, and I loved the ending when Adam finally found Sissy and everything turned out alright for the cousins and those two, It was wonderful that Meg’s cousin took the baby, THANK YOU
This is such a beautiful story of fear and faith. I would love to have a peek at their lives a year down the road… just sayin’. Thank you, bahj.
Bahj, absolutely beautiful, heart wrenching, faith restoring…
I’d love to read of a continuation.