Posted 21 November 2013 – 06:43 AM

sklamb, on 21 Nov 2013 – 05:25 AM, said:

Wow, BWF, you’re getting good at this good twin/evil twin pairing of stories!

Analyzing the pair at hand, I particularly enjoyed how you used the key word in such different ways in the two stories, and how you found a use in the second story for that concluding sentence you decided to cut from the first one, and the way you balanced out the tragedy in the second version with the humor of Little Joe’s innocent antics. Very enjoyable throughout!

But I find, on careful consideration, that I prefer the first version. 

Author’s Response:  SKLamb, I agree, even my ‘evil’ twin agrees with your careful consideration.

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Posted 20 November 2013 – 05:48 PM

JoaniePaiute, on 20 Nov 2013 – 5:04 PM, said:

Bluewind, the serial Cartwright-killer…

Oh, Inca, what have you unleashed? 

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Inca, on 19 Nov 2013 – 3:09 PM, said:

I just can’t get dead Cartwrights off my mind now!