Reflections on a Gentle Soul (by Patina)

Reviewer: Dodo Anonymous 
Date: 29 Nov 2010 02:07 pm Title: Reflections on a Gentle Soul

Three wonderfully thought out scenes from Vengeance which reflected the thoughts of Adam, Ben and Joe perfectly.  Brilliantly done Patina.  This was an all too short read which I was loath to finish…wanted more!

Author’s Response:

Thank you, Dodo.  I’m pleased to know this left you wanting more and sorry that I didn’t write a longer story.

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Author: patina

I'm a historical archaeologist who loves westerns and Bonanza is my favorite. I wrote my first Bonanza story in 2006 and the plot bunnies are still hopping. The majority of my stories include the entire family and many are prequels set during the period when Ben and Marie were married.

2 thoughts on “Reflections on a Gentle Soul (by Patina)

  1. Thank you. These scenes would have certainly made the episode better. Of course I was most touched by Adam’s. He and Hoss had such a strong conection, they didn’t need words when a look could say as much. You did a wonderful job putting words to his (their) worries.

    1. Thank you, Beej! If only the episodes could give us a glimpse into the Cartwrights’ inner thoughts on occasion. I’m so glad to know you enjoyed these “missing scenes.”

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