Summary: All Joe wanted was some blackberry pie; was that too much to ask for? Yet Adam and Pa didn’t seem to have any consideration for it. At all.
Winning story of the 2016 Ponderosa Paddlewheel Poker Tournament.
Rated mild T (canonical violence and a mention of blood) – 2660 words
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Hero
Joe Cartwright abandoned all hope of blackberry pie at the International House the moment Stanford Paine called his father a horse thief right in the middle of C-Street.
He heard his brother Adam hiss, “Leave it, Pa,” but he knew that was in vain. Joe didn’t understand everything that had happened between the Cartwrights and the Paines those past few weeks but he understood that this shout was the final straw. No one called Pa a horse thief. Especially not in the middle of town where everyone could hear it.
Adam groaned as Pa brushed his hand from his arm and whirled around to face Mr. Paine in one movement. Had he really hoped to soothe Pa’s temper with just a restraining hand? Obviously he had, for he pinched the bridge of his nose and shut his eyes real tight for a moment, and then, shaking his head, followed Pa’s brisk stride to the hitching post in front of the Bucket of Blood saloon, where Mr. Paine and his men stood.
Important things usually happened when six-year-olds weren’t around. Or said six-year-olds were instantly whisked away. This time things happened so fast no one thought of whisking Joe away. In fact, no one even paid Joe any attention—no one but Hoss, that was. But Hoss was twelve, and there are those rare moments in which that six year gap wasn’t as wide as it usually seemed. Moments like when you left the Ponderosa and Hop Sing’s lemonade and went with Pa and Adam and a couple of ranch hands to Virginia City just because you hoped for a piece of blackberry pie at the International House as well as like when you were put out of harm’s way—or out of everything grown up’s way.
So Joe and Hoss just exchanged one look, then simultaneously made themselves as unobtrusive as possible (not an easy feat for someone of Hoss’s stature) as they followed everyone else over to the Bucket of Blood and found a place to linger on the sidelines but with a good view, side by side with a saloon girl clad in a violently pink dress.
By the time Joe had diverted his look from the frills at the girl’s neckline (they were made of a funny, holey fabric that almost looked like the net curtains in Pa’s bedroom, only black), the men from the DoubleR ranch had formed a tight cluster around Mr. Paine and his eldest son Ethan, and those from the Ponderosa one around Pa and Adam. They were trading colorful insults, most of which Joe had never heard before and which he desperately hoped he’d remember when school started again.
Pa’s face was almost as red as Mr. Paine’s, and both he and Mr. Paine alternated between shouting at each other and berating their respective sons. Ethan Paine looked just as furious as his Pa and added to the mayhem mostly by repeating “horse thief!”, whereas Adam looked—well, just like Adam. Maddeningly calm. Only those who knew him very well—and paid attention—saw the telltale twitch of his eyebrow and how every now and then his hand rose and was willed down before the fingers could pinch the bridge of his nose.
Adam didn’t shout, but as usual, his calm voice was clearly heard over the ruckus. “I’m certain neither my father nor you is a horse thief, Mr. Paine. Why don’t we go and have a drink and settle this like the reasonable men we all are?” There was emphasis on “reasonable” and “all”, but that only seemed to anger Pa and Mr. Paine more.
“My men caught that stallion weeks ago,” Mr. Paine growled. “Then your men stole it. In my eyes that makes their boss a horse thief.”
Pa snorted. “My men caught that horse running free on the plains. It wasn’t branded, it belonged to no one. It’s rightfully mine.”
“And the lasso around his neck? Didn’t that tell you someone’d already caught it?”
“It told me someone had tried to catch it—but not succeeded. You have no claim on a horse you just tried to catch.”
“But we done caught it,” Ethan broke in. “It just broke free again, that’s why there was a lasso around his neck.”
“Well, if it breaks free it isn’t quite caught, right? Next time, Paine, your men might do better.”
That, naturally, brought on a lot of shouting again, mostly from Ethan and Paine’s men, but soon the Ponderosa hands were joining in.
Joe trained his ears on Adam, though, who talked insistently to Pa. He only caught “compromise” and “money”, but that was enough to understand why Pa was shaking his head.
The stallion this all was about was the most promising horse they’d caught in years. Adam was already breaking it, and even though it seemed more difficult to break than any horse they’d seen before, it was worth every effort. It was a tall, broad and powerful animal, high spirited with endurance beyond anything they’d ever seen in a horse. It was long decided that the stallion was not going to be sold, but to be used for breeding and for roping in other horses.
Joe knew that the DoubleR claimed they had caught the stallion first, and he knew that threats had been uttered—and delivered. Fences had been cut, short cuts to pastures had been blocked by inexplicable rock fall, fire had destroyed a hay rick, and Adam had almost tumbled down a ravine when his saddle came lose because someone had obviously cut into the cinch. Of course, there was no proof the DoubleR was behind those things, but there were rumors enough.
Joe also knew that Adam thought no horse was worth all that bad blood. He’d heard Adam say Pa was “stubborn and unreasonable” and should make concessions, one night when he’d been supposed to be in bed and not eavesdropping, and then Pa had given Adam an earful about it: Mr. Paine didn’t deserve concessions, Mr. Paine himself never made concessions, and didn’t Adam remember the incident with the Ponderosa calves on Paine’s land? He’d said several more things then, about how Adam obviously had too much time if he spend so much of it stewing over things that weren’t his concern and such; but as great as it had been to hear Adam getting a first class scolding, Joe’d been so tired he’d fallen asleep on the top of the landing before he’d ever learned more about that incident with the calves.
There was no reason not to be on Pa’s side, Joe thought. Perhaps Adam was being stubborn and unreasonable and should make concessions?
Joe decided to contribute that thought to the overall argument, but just as he opened his mouth someone bellowed, “Quiet!” with a voice like thunder.
It wasn’t the word or even the booming voice that made them all, to the last man, stop. It was the fact that the most unexpected man had delivered the command: Adam. Joe’d known his brother had a loud voice, heck, he’d heard him sing in the barn from miles away. But he’d never heard him shout at people.
The stunned crowd now rearranged itself into a circle centering around Joe’s eldest brother, and Adam, obviously not intimidated by that at all, smiled a quick, lopsided smile that was almost too tiny to notice and said more softly than before, “If you will listen for just a moment, I’ll offer you a way to end this argument peacefully. It has really gotten all out of proportion, don’t you think?”
“I don’t need you telling me—” Ethan started, but Mr. Paine interrupted him.
“No, I want to hear it.”
Adam nodded once, then took a deep breath. “Pa, Mr. Paine, I think we reached an impasse here. We have been neighbors for how long? Ten years, surely. Mr. Paine, we helped you sink your well, do you remember that? And Pa, the Paines were suporting you when Marie died, you haven’t forgotten that, right? That stallion…is it worth destroying the good relations we used to have?”
Pa looked furious—the way he did when Adam was right. Mr. Paine looked down. Ethan tried to say something, but was silenced by his father before he’d uttered anything comprehensible.
“I’ve been stewing over this for a long time already,” Adam said, glancing at Pa and taking the time to raise an eyebrow at him. “As the horse is already worked upon and mostly broken, I think it would be wise to not relocate it. But if everything goes as planned, our best mare will have the stallion’s foal next spring, and perhaps, Pa, you can pledge to Mr. Paine that that foal will be his.”
There was murmuring among the men, all eyes on Pa and Mr. Paine. The two men looked at each other, and Joe saw slow smiles spreading over their faces. They nodded, and Pa reached his hand out to Mr. Paine, who took it and said, “You’ve got a smart boy there, Ben.”
Pa looked at Adam with his “wait till we’re at home”-face, but only for a moment, then he chuckled and said, “You have no idea,” and they all laughed.
Not Ethan, though, who looked as if he wanted to say something, thought better of it, and turned away—and then whirled back with his gun in hand and fired.
Colts leapt into hands almost instantly. Paine’s men all seemed armed; most of the Ponderosa hands, too. Even Pa had his gun out, trained on Ethan. The only unarmed men left were Adam, still standing there with his arms crossed, and Mr. Paine, who carefully laid his hand over Ethan’s gun and pressed it down.
“Please,” he said. “We don’t want to draw blood.”
Joe held his breath. Hoss tried to push his younger brother behind his back; the saloon girl next to Joe ducked behind another bystander.
There was no sound in the street except for the heavy breathing of the men. Then Adam’s voice broke the silence. “Was anyone hit? No?”
A pause. Low murmurs. Shaking of heads. Then the noise of Ehtan’s Colt clanging on the ground.
And Mr. Paine again, “Well, obviously not. Thank the Lord for that. I apologize, Ben.”
“It’s all right, Stanford. As you say: no harm done.” Pa slowly reholstered his revolver. “Weapons down, boys.”
Not only did the Ponderosa men obey, the DoubleR hands did, too. Even Ethan mumbled something apologetic, and the city sighed with relief.
Joe considered making himself perceivable again and suggesting they all had blackberry pie at the International House now, but Pa’s dark gaze swept over all of them, lingered on Hoss and him for a moment before Pa closed his eyes briefly and said just one word, “Home!”
And home they went. It was a quiet ride on the buckboard; Hoss and Joe had a subdued discussion about the blackberry pie they hadn’t had, Pa chewed on the inside of his mouth as if on words he’d love to say to Adam but for some reason couldn’t, and Adam leaned against a bag of rice, back hunched and shoulders sagged, even quieter than usual. He didn’t look up once, and Joe guessed he was stewing over things that now very well concerned him, too.
Adam still hadn’t uttered a single word when they finally reached the Ponderosa. At first, Joe thought Adam had fallen asleep, but then his brother rose almost reluctantly and eased himself down from the wagon bed. He staggered a few steps, shook his head and then walked stiff-legged towards the house.
“Hey,” Joe cried after him. “There are bags to unload, Mr. clever pants.”
Adam flinched at that, shook his head again and turned slowly. His arms hanging limply at his sides, he stared at a point somewhere behind Joe, then his eyes completely lost focus, he began to sway, and when Pa, at Hoss’s cry, rushed to him, he just collapsed into his arms.
“What in tarnation…,” Pa muttered as he tried to shake Adam awake.
“Pa,” Hoss said, and when Pa didn’t react he repeated it a little louder and a little more urgently. “Pa, look.” He pointed to the bag of rice Adam had leaned against.
The burlap was drenched in blood.
Joe was at Pa’s side in an instant, and now that he knew what to look for, he noticed the wet stain on Adam’s shirt that his hunched posture and the black material had hidden. As Pa pried the fabric loose, he saw the hole in Adam’s side, small and innocent, still sluggishly oozing blood.
The next hours passed in a blurry whirlwind for Joe. Pa bellowed out orders while he took Adam upstairs into his room: someone was to ride back to Virginia City to get the doctor, Hoss was to help Pa; Joe was tasked with alerting Hop Sing and bringing towels and hot water, with picking Adam’s discarded clothes from the floor and burning them, with bringing more water and more towels, then with staying out of the way as the doctor came and went.
His world slowed down again and the fog of fear eventually dissolved when Joe was allowed to enter Adam’s bedroom, and Pa smiled at him and said that Adam was one lucky boy.
Adam looked pale as a ghost and lay so still Joe was eerily reminded of Maman after…but Pa said it was only the blood loss that made Adam sleep and the something the doctor had given him, that the bullet hadn’t penetrated very deeply and came out without problems. “He’ll be right as rain in no time, you’ll see.”
Joe fought the urge to climb onto Pa’s lap as he was much too grown up for that, but he managed to wriggle himself into the stuffed chair next to his father instead. It couldn’t be very comfortable for Pa, but he just put his arm around Joe and pulled him even closer.
“It was Ethan’s bullet, wasn’t it, Pa?”
“Yes. Adam paid for my stubbornness. Had I made concessions earlier, all this could have been prevented. Remember that, Joe.”
Joe chewed on his lower lip. “Why didn’t say Adam he was hit? He could’ve gone to Doctor Paul right then.”
“Yes.”
“So why…?”
Pa sighed. “Because your brother is, as Mr. Paine said, a smart boy.”
“Don’t sound too smart t’me.”
“Joe, what would have happened if Adam had said he’d been hit? What do you think?”
Joe remembered the drawn revolvers, the nervous silence, the hard breathing. “Someone would’ve shot Ethan down?” he ventured.
Pa nodded. “And then someone would have shot at the one who shot Ethan, then someone at that man and then…”
Joe shuddered. “Everyone could’ve…” He didn’t even want to think it, much less say it out loud. Pa had been right in the middle of that.
“There could have been dozens of victims,” Pa agreed. “Only because of Adam’s silence we dodged that. It could have come at a great cost, but we dodged that, too. We were lucky today.”
“But Adam is a victim,” Joe said.
“Small price,” croaked a voice from the bed. “Worth it.”
That, of course, spurred Pa to action. He helped Adam drink some water, mobbed at his brow, and fussed with the bedclothes, all the while Adam was mumbling, “’m fine, Pa” and rolling his eyes at Joe behind Pa’s back.
Joe grinned back at him and made funny faces. No, he thought, his brother wasn’t a victim. A hero, more like.
What a story that would make at school. Absolutely worth the missed blackberry pie.
The End
Words drawn: victim, stallion, dodge, stew, blackberry
Thank you very much for the betas, Joaniepaiute and Sklamb!
Tags: Adam Cartwright, Ben Cartwright, Joe / Little Joe Cartwright,
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Beautiful story! I Love tô imagine imagine Little Joe idolizing his big brother!!!
When everyone else is losing their heads, young Adam sees clearly. This is Adam at his core. Now that they know their hero is gonna be alright I hope Hop Sing has enough blackberries to make a pie!
Eighteen-year-old Adam has the wisdom and presence of mind of someone twice his age, but then I’ve always said those Cartwrights are an exceptional bunch, right down to and including young Little Joe’s keen observations. 🙂 A heroic tale and a very entertaining read, faust.
Only Adam…
Thanks a lot for reading and for your kind comment, JC!
You can really see who the boys will become, even Ben.
Aww, thank you! That’s the best thing you could have said! So glad you found them all true to character.
Adam really is a hero! Great job, Faust!
I’m glad you think so, too, Juanita! Thanks for reading and replying!
I really enjoyed the story. Typical of Adam to keep his head when all about him were losing theirs.
So glad you enjoyed this one; thanks for telling me! Yeah, we all know that “Adam is real calm in an emergency”… 🙂
No, you’re right: Adam is the most level-headed most of the times, but often without thought for his own safety.
Enjoyed the story from the get-go. Adam’s solution was a great one. Having a gun and a poor sport temperment never mix.( Ethan). Glad every thing turned out ok. Little Joe and the family were lucky and Adam saved the day. Hope Hop Sing makes an Apple pie for all or maybe even Blueberry.
You know what? I actually wanted to add a scene in which Hop Sing bakes that blackberry pie and serves it the convalescent and his little brother, but it would have dragged the end needlessly, so i cut it. But in my imagination…
All in all, there were so many things I had to cut because the deadline was looming, and i needed to make this veery short.
Thank you for reading, Judy, and for the lovely reply!
It’s the sacrifice that makes the difference between a victim and a hero.
In your story Ben is the hotheaded “protector of wha is his” we know from the very early episodes. Did he change to the wise patriarch of the later episodes with Adam’s help? It seems so in your very thoughtful story. Well done.
This story was heavily influenced by “Blood on the Land” and Ben’s and Adam’s very different approach on things. Yes, I believe Adam was a calming influence on his father, and Ben had a very short fuse in those first years.
And you know, Adam is always “very calm in face of an emergency”… 😆
Thanks a lot for the kind review Sibylle. (Siehst Du: Ich kann Deinen Namen auch richtig schreiben …)
Good story. I just have one question. Didn’t anyone wonder why Joe was asleep on the landing?
Um, let me think…no. No one ever wondered because it was a normal thing. Joe frequently fell asleep on the landing because he frequently eavesdropped. Of course, Ben thought it was only because Joe felt lonely after Marie died and needed to hear his family’s voices, the fell asleep.
At least that’s my story and I’m sticking to it. 🙂
Glad you like the story. Joe’s is not the easiest POV for me to write, but try…
Joe was right on who the real hero is in the story. Thanks for showing us that when one keeps his cool, everyone benefits. Thanks for the good read.
Thank you for the kind review, Kima!
I like to show Adam and Joe as brother who like and respect and are proud of each other. I’m glad you enjoyed that, too.
A nearly disastrous day in town. Adam’s practicality wins, and nearly loses, the day. I enjoy prequels in which I see the traits of the grown-up sons. Well done!
I love your summary “Adam’s practicality wins, and nearly loses, the day.” That’s really the gist of the matter, right?
And since you’re the master of the kind of prequels you describe in your review, I’m very happy for your approval! Thanks a lot!
Great story
Thank you!
Another good story with characters aptly portrayed. The twists and turns kept this reader anxious. And, the explanation of how the main problem was resolved was on target.
So glad you think I’ve got the characters…well, in character. It’s what I’m striving for, the most important tick box to be checked.
Thanks a lot for reading and for telling me you liked it!
Characters were spot on, lesson given, lesson learned.
Thank you, Jojay! I’m glad you approve with my portrayal of our beloved Cartwrights. That’s really what counts, isn’t it?
Ah, Adam, my hero! Or rather, Joe’s hero. I loved the tension of the face-off and Little Joe’s observations throughout. I would love to see this developed into a longer story, even though it’s pretty much perfect as it is.
My thoughts exactly. There so much to tell around this snippet of a story. It stands completed as it is, but there could be more meat. Blame the looming deadline, and my inability to start when there’s still time for more.
But who knows, perhaps I’ll come back to this. I think I might want to tell more about the hos and whys and if Joe eventually gets his blackberry pie.
Thanks a lot for your wonderful comment, Sierra Girl!
I Loved your coment!
That’s the difference between a victim and a hero.
You nailed all the characters and managed to put a very good message across.
Great job!
Again I’m very glad you think I got the characters right.
I had Ben vs. Jeb Drummond in my mind as I plotted the story. Apparently he needed more than one sacrifice from Adam to really get the message… 😆 All right, lets call it a slight relapse. One has to keep in mind Adam was away at the college for a long time, Ben might have forgotten…
Sorry, I’m rambling. What I really wanted to say was: thank you so much for your lovely review, Foreverfree!
Yes, those are the Cartwrights — you nailed them. Ben being all those things, stubborn, angry, strong, and then caring and supportive. Adam, supporting his father but not in his shadow doing what he thinks is right no matter what, and the younger boys watching, learning, and pulling together. Great story.
Ah, thank you so much, Betty! What a truly wonderful review! I’m so happy you found my Cartwrights true to character.
I think you’ve nailed it yourself with this: “Adam, supporting his father but not in his shadow doing what he thinks is right no matter what” – that’s our Adam to a tee.
Again, thank you for reading and liking and telling me so!
Typical of Ben. Typical of Adam, and typical of Little Joe and Hoss. You nailed all the characters. Nice job!
Thanks a lot, JFClover! I’m very glad you think I got the characters right.
Drama, action, wisdom, acurate characterizations, and a young boy’s wry observations about fashion and language . . . what more could one want in an entertaining story? More! that’s what.
😆 Cheaux, I’m very, very happy you approve of my young Joe! It was fun writing him so. No idea where this sudden interest in women’s fashion came from…that dress must have been quite impressive.
I’m also glad you liked the story over all–even though I sense a little disappointment with its length… Well, you set the deadline–all right, and I procrastinated like nobody’s business.
Since there are two of you already (or, rather, three, since I’m one of you, too) I might be persuaded to give it a second try… No promises, but I’ll try.
Thank you for the lovely comment, and once again, thank you for organising this wonderful contest!
Well done! Adam saved pa from himself and saved many others from spilling their own blood. Thanks for contributing this.
Just himself he did not really save, I’m afraid. But that’s our Adam, right? No matter the cost…
Thanks a lot for your kind review, Belle! It’s much appreciated!
Like two bulls in a China shop, and unfortunately, someone had to pay the price. A good lesson taught to Little Joe, of lessons remembered by Ben too late. Oh my!
Yeah, and Ben even forgot it again when dealing with Jeb Drummond and his sheep. Adam must have had a deja vu then… 🙂
Sounds like something that could make a lovely little sequel to this…hmm…
Thanks a lot for your kind review, BWF, and the involuntary prompt!
very good story…. Thanks. How a blackberry pie might have terrible consequences.
Well, the blackberry pie didn’t have any consequences, it rather was Pa’s hardheadedness, I’m afraid. 😆
Thank you for your kind words, mumu!
Now that’s the Ben I know–usually smart and capable, but occasionally a shade too darn stubborn for his own (or anyone else’s) good. And that’s the Adam I fell for all those years ago…. Never a victim, frequently a hero. And Little Joe was adorable! Blackberry pie for the house!
Thanks a lot!
Yeah, Pa had those moments of loss of reason. In my imagination there were more of those in the early years, and he got calmer when he grew older. And Adam – I love to write him this way, Little Joe, too.
Do you think they could include the two of us in the blackberry pie round?
Brave Adam! And, oh, little Little Joe. He sure will get blackberry pie some day later. Good story.
I’m certain Joe will get that pie, sooner or later. If anyone can wheedle that out of Hop sing then it’s Joe. And I bet he’ll share with Adam.
Thanks a lot for the kind words, Silver Sven!