Restoring the Heart of the Ponderosa – Part 2 (by BluewindFarm)

Reviewer: countrygirl
Date: 21 Mar 2014 05:00 am Title: Restoring the Heart of the Ponderosa – Part TwoWow are you aware that last night i turned off the light pretty late o early (i mean well past midnight you can consider prettu early in the morning ) to finish part one and reading halfway in the part 2? I’ve jus t finished part 2 and i’m speechless i simply love your stories. you are a very talented writer who is able to write a 3 dimensional characters….Author’s Response:CountryGirl, I’m so sorry that you lost so much sleep on my account, but then again… It’s a great compliment to a writer that they’ve written something that has kept the reader ‘glued’ to the story that they just can’t put it down. Hopefully you’ll be able to catch up on your sleep over the weekend.Thank you for your compliments concerning my writing as well.

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Reviewer: Maria Vaz
Date: 25 Feb 2014 07:57 am Title: Restoring the Heart of the Ponderosa – Part TwoWow, great story! I would like to have more knowledge of your language in order to be able to say correctly how much I appreciated the reading. Thank you!Author’s Response:Maria, you sentiment regarding language says more than enough.  Thank you for taking the time to read this story and for leaving your comments.

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Reviewer: Laurie 
Date: 22 Feb 2014 12:51 am Title: Restoring the Heart of the Ponderosa – Part TwoWhat a journey! Thanks so much!Author’s Response:Laurie,Thank you for giving up some of your Friday night to read Part Two.  It was quite the journey to put to paper. And you’re welcome.

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Reviewer: dmc824 

Date: 21 Feb 2014 03:34 am Title: Restoring the Heart of the Ponderosa – Part TwoI have re-read this amazing story after reading and reviewing each chapter as they were writen. A lot of great Joe/Adam and Joe/Pa interaction. Very emotional story and well worth reading over and over! This is an A plus story.Author’s Response:Denise,I’m glad you gave the story another read in its entirety.  Thank you for your request after RTHOTP was posted for a follow-up story. I had thought to have Part Two tell Joe’s POV, but I couldn’t pull it off.  So I decided on a continuation with Joe’s experiences being told in flashback sequences.  It was quite exhausting to write, imagining the scenes of the story and then putting them to paper.  I hate to say it, but I was quite happy to finally say, The End.

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Reviewer: Belle 
Date: 20 Feb 2014 07:15 pm Title: Restoring the Heart of the Ponderosa – Part Two

Great job!  I admire your ability to expose emotions and weave a tender story.  Thanks for sharing this with us.

Author’s Response:

Belle,

Thank you for taking the time to read this story, and for your compliments.  You’re welcome.

 

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Author: BluewindFarm

A dressage rider who's a cowgirl at heart. I wasn't old enough during the heyday of Westerns on TV. However, with the introduction of cable and satellite services in the 1980's, I fell in love with Bonanza, Lancer, The Big Valley, The Rifleman, and The Wild, Wild West, among others. Through syndication and fanfiction; our heroes will live on forever. I hope you enjoy the stories I've written, and I look forward to reading your comments.

5 thoughts on “Restoring the Heart of the Ponderosa – Part 2 (by BluewindFarm)

  1. This is a wonderful series. I enjoy reading this prequel as it captures the spirit and the essence of all of the Cartwrights as they heal after a trauma.

  2. Une histoire bien menée, avec une grande psychologie, digne d’auteurs connus pour leurs écrits.
    La saga d’une inoubliable famille, l’amour remet toujours les choses en place.

  3. This is definitely one of my favorite stories. I love how Adam is the one to find him and I adore a young Joe! It is wonderful to read about the whole family caring for Joe….great story!!!!!!

  4. I just wanted you to know I have re-read Restoring The Heart. I didn’t see my previous review so I’ll let you this a story I love to get into and have a hard time getting away from. I highly recommend it to anyone who loves Bonanza fanfic. I know it’s a story I’ll read again.

    1. DMC – thank you so much for giving this series a second read. It means a lot to any writer to have a story pull a reader into their world more than once.

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