Summary: When a pistol-packing stranger starts asking questions about a Cartwright the moment he hits town, Sam, the bartender, knows trouble’s bound to follow.
WC = 2093, Rating = T
A Man for Breakfast
The sun was barely out of bed when this tall stranger sauntered into the saloon. Not even my mornin’ regulars had arrived. I continued polishin’ the bar as I kept one eye on the man. Judging by his beardless face he looked to be pretty young. And as hot as it was this early in the morning I had to wonder how he stood the duster and heavy hat. Standin’ in the doorway he studied every nook and cranny in the place. For the life of me I couldn’t figure what he might be expectin’ to find considering the place was empty. When he finally turned toward me, makin’ his coat swing open, I saw he was packin’ iron on both sides of his belt. Havin’ his near black eyes bore into me and seein’ his guns, I began to wonder if he was a lone rider. That’s all I didn’t need was some lunatic on the run and lookin’ to shoot up the place. Now I’m not one to rattle easy but this kid gave me the willies and I wanted him gone.
“You servin’ this early?” His eyes kept roving around like he was expecting somebody to jump out at him.
“Yeah.”
“Whiskey, and some information.” He slapped a gold piece onto the counter but kept his hand over it.
“Depends on what kind of information you’re lookin’ for.”
He downed the first shot so fast I placed the bottle within reach and sure ‘nough, he poured more. “Been hearin’ about a cowboy takin’ down a business man for murder. Maybe happened about a month or so ago.”
I gulped. We get our share of shootings and arguments like any other town but the situation this fella asked about left me cold. He could only mean one incident and I had no plans to divulge what I knew considering one of the men involved is a good friend of mine.
“Look, if you want to know what happened I suggest you go ask our Sheriff.” I turned my back on him and started rearranging the bottles.
“You tellin’ me you weren’t around at that time?”
“No, I was around. But one of the men is a good friend and I don’t want to discuss it. It’s over and settled with the law.” I felt his eyes boring into my back daring me to leave it there. And I couldn’t, if he was gonna cause some trouble. “Why’s it so important to you anyway?”
“I’ve got my reasons. All I’ve heard is bits and pieces and I want to know the truth. I prefer to keep the law out of it until I have more information.”
I’ve seen his likes before and I knew he’d be like a dog to a bone. Well if he wouldn’t talk to Roy, I figured I better tell him what he wants to know. At least that way I can make sure he gets the story right.
“Alright, I’ll try to answer your questions but there’s a limit to how personal I get.”
The stranger pushed back his hat and gulped down another jigger. “I heard the business man was bein’ accused of robbin’ and murderin’ a way station attendant, but there was no way to prove it since his face was covered.”
Skeptical as to what he needed to know since he had the jist of things already, I played my cards close. “Yeah, that’s right.”
“And there seemed to be a witness, name of Cartwright, who claimed this other man, named Enders, was the killer.”
“Yeah, and the witness was right all along.”
“And this Cartwright fella knew Enders personally.”
“They were business partners, that’s all.”
The batwing doors swung open and a few of my morning regulars drifted in. The kid pulled his hat down and, grabbing his bottle, headed to a corner table. The gold piece had been left behind so I pocketed it, noticing he gave me a cold eye. I guessed he expected more answers. Well, it would have to wait till I took care of my customers.
As the last of the men settled into a game of faro, the man signaled for me to come over. Despite havin’ an entire bottle of whiskey inside him, he was stable as can be.
“From what I was told Cartwright was a lily-livered liar with his accusations of murder, all so he could steel Enders’ business and keep Enders’ wife as his own left-handed wife.”
I cringed at that and bore my own eyes into his. “Now. listen here, you pull your horns in. Those were lies spoken by Enders and his wife to throw suspicion off of him. He was the lily-livered one trying to ruin Adam’s good name and make him out to be a fool.” I rose from my chair and gave the man one last piece of advice. “You wanted the truth and I gave it to you, but if you have any more questions I suggest you either go talk to Sheriff Coffee or swallow ‘em and leave town.” Realizing I’d lost his attention I glanced over my shoulder and felt my heart hammer. Leaning against the bar was none other than Adam Cartwright.
I hustled back to the bar to give him a beer and a warning but I was too late.
The stranger stood not three feet behind Adam, his duster tucked neatly behind his two pistols. “Are you Adam Cartwight?”
The mug Adam held froze in mid air, and his eyes drifted to mine. I leaned in close. “He’s been asking about Bill Enders.”
Adam slowly rolled his eyes upward then closed them, as he rested his mug on the counter. I’d seen that look one other time, when Bill was egging Adam on, so I stepped closer to my shotgun as I watched Adam release his breath and slowly turn to face the stranger.
“Who wants to know?” His voice was barely audible.
“Name’s Grayson…Enders. The man whose reputation you ruined and put behind bars is my brother.”
I grabbed my shotgun and held on for dear life. The only reaction I could see from Adam was his white-knuckled grip on the edge of the counter. He was the only man I knew who had that dangerous kind of control. Silence hung heavy between the two men, like being in the bottom of a grave.
Adam straightened, allowing his right hand to drift to his side while still gripping the bar with his left. The way the other man flinched, I knew Adam’s eyes were boring into him. I kept my eyes on both of them while quiet motion through the room told me my patrons were seeking safer places from which to watch the action.
“You gonna deny it?”
“He put himself behind bars by murdering an unarmed man, and attempting to murder two more, his partner in crime and me. Now if you will excuse me, I’m going to finish my beer and I suggest you speak to our Sheriff if you have any more questions.”
Adam rotated around and took up his beer once more but his hand never left the vicinity of his pistol.
The stranger remained a moment longer before strolling outside. The suffocating air left with him and everyone started breathing again.
I laid my weapon on the counter, and glanced at my friend. “Another beer, or perhaps a whiskey?”
Adam nodded and I poured him a shot of my best whiskey. He tested it, smiled, and drank it down. I refilled the glass and watched as he sipped that one.
“What are you gonna do?”
“About him?” He tilted his head toward the door. “Not sure.”
“You in town alone?”
“Nope, Hoss is coming over in a minute. We’re heading on to Placerville.”
“Let me send Billy to alert Roy.’
“No need.”
Both our heads swiveled at the familiar voice.
“I seen him ride in. Got some wires about him hittin’ all the local towns askin’ the same questions. Put a couple of my deputies to watchin’ him now. Adam, as soon as Hoss gets here you need to leave.”
“No Roy. I don’t run. Hoss is due a beer and he’s going to get it.”
“Now, Adam…I’m just lookin’ to make sure there ain’t no man for breakfast in my town.”
“Listen Roy, I’ve done nothing to provoke him. He’s running on his own hatred. I promise you I won’t be the victim today or any other day, but if he comes after me I will defend myself.”
I could tell Roy was losing this battle with Adam, as well as his patience. He huffed, and when Hoss entered, Roy groused at him. “You got one stubborn, pigheaded brother. I just hope he makes it through the mornin’ in one piece.”
Hoss scowled and grabbed at the beer I poured him. Adam filled him in and Hoss had one thing to say. “He’s across the street waitin’ for ya. But Roy’s deputies got him in their sights. So how do you want to play this?”
Adam smirked, and Hoss lifted his eyebrows as he finished his beer. “Ready?”
“Yeah. See you ‘round Sam, and thanks.” I caught the coin he slid my way and smiled, another gold piece.
Holding my breath I began counting. Got to two when the shot rang out, followed by at least three more in rapid succession then silence. I had to know. Running to the swing doors I peered over them just as the town clock struck nine.
Hoss came around the corner from an alley and Adam was rising from behind a horse trough. He cleared the chambers of his pistol and shoved it back into its holder. Across the street Grayson Enders’ body lay face down. I stepped out to check on my friends.
“You fellas okay?”
“Yeah.”
“Sure, Sam.”
Hoss slapped his brother on the back, a grin on his face. “That was quite a dive you took there, older brother. Looks like Roy just missed having a man for breakfast.”
Adam’s face remained somber as he stared across the street while slipping his hat back into place. “I keep my promises.”
We three stood there counting the last of the clock chimes. When they finished Adam strolled over to Enders who was being yanked to his feet by the deputies. Roy stood nearby with a shotgun trained on his prisoner.
Even from where I stood I could tell Enders’ black-eyed scowl at Adam had nothing to do with the pain in his arm.
Adam looked him over from head to toe. “You’re lucky I nicked your arm before these two got to you. Otherwise you’d be heading to the undertaker down the street.”
“You’re the unlucky one. You should have killed me when you had the chance. Now I’ll be shadowing you for the rest of your life.”
“No you won’t, mister. You got some jail time coming and if you survive that, you won’t be allowed back in Nevada if I have my say.” Roy nodded toward the jail.
Enders struggled to get to Adam. “I’ll get you Cartwright.”
Adam tucked his thumbs into his gun belt. “You and Bill are cut from the same cloth. The only difference is, you don’t have the same shooting skills as your brother. My advice is that you take Roy’s advice and stay out of Nevada. You just might live longer that way.”
Pivoting on his heel Adam rejoined me and Hoss outside the saloon.
Hoss’ grin dropped away. “You sure you shoulda done that, Adam?”
Adam rubbed his neck and threw a look of chagrin back to his brother. “Probably not, but it sure felt good.”
I put a hand on each of my friends’ shoulders, holding out the two gold pieces I’d been given that morning. “How about I buy us all breakfast.”
Hoss looked to Adam and waited for his answer. A corner of his mouth rose pushing out the left dimple. “Sounds good. Millie’s?”
Hoss rubbed his hands together. “Ain’t no place better.”
I tossed my apron on the counter and left the saloon in Billy’s hands. In spite of the cheerful walk to Millie’s Cafe and Hoss trying to keep things light, we both knew it might take a bit more time for Adam to return to his old self. But, hey, steak and eggs at Millie’s with good friends was a great place to start.
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A/N – A WHN for The Ride. Written for a challenge to use Cowboy Lingo
Long rider (outlaw, esp. one who’s been riding a long time to escape law enforcement)
Pack iron (carry a revolver)
A lily liver (a coward)
Left-handed wife (mistress)
Pull your horns in (quit looking for trouble; back off)
Man for breakfast (a murdered body in the streets at dawn)
Tags: Adam Cartwright, revenge
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I’m not sure how I missed this, butvim glad I finally got to read it! For Grayson’s sake he better heed Adam’s advice. The lighthearted ending was a great way to wrap up a tense story.
I’m glad you found it too and that enjoyed reading it. Yes, Grayson needs to make some better decisions. I’m glad you enjoyed the ending. As always thanks for reading and commenting.
I love the point of view this was written from. I think Sam is such an underrated an under used character. A fantastic and faithful follow up to the episode. Thanks for writing and sharing!
Thanks CareBear for your lovely comments about it linking well to the episode. . I’m so pleased you like the POV. Sam’s my favorite bartender, him and his shotgun. 😀 Thanks for reading and sharing your thoughts.
I don’t know why it took me so long to get around to this story! As soon as I figured out it was a WHN for the Ride, an episode I legit just watched the other day, I was hooked! You wrote the characters so well! And the POV was very unique. Adam played the situation out so, so well. It was all very Adam. I loved when Roy came in for backup and how supportive Hoss was, as always. Overall, you did a wonderful job with this one! I thoroughly enjoyed it!
Thank you so much. It means a lot for you to say that it was all ‘very Adam’. The Ride is one of my all-time favorites and I really enjoyed creating this piece and working with the characters. I’m so glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for reading.
Love how calm and collected Adam is.
Ohh, me too. He was calm and cool with Enders as well. That’s when he can be the most dangerous. Thanks for reading.
This was a good representation of Adam. Just exactly as I’d picture his reaction: controlled, sure and no nonsense. And when pushed too far, he’d respond in a way that sent a message rather than dispatching the person forever. Well done!
Thank you so much for your comments. It’s reassuring that Adam’s characteristics came across, especially at the end. I had a different ending planned but leave it to Adam to set me straight. 😀
Adam dépeint avec une grande précision d’écriture. J’aime toute l’histoire qui se termine bien pour
Hoss, autour d’une bonne tablée.
Thank you. Yes, Hoss got his beer and a good meal after all was said and done.
Great story to follow The Ride, and the use of western slang made it all the more authentic.
I have you to thank for the challenge but it was fun. I’m glad you enjoyed the story and the follow on a favorite episode. Thanks for leaving your thoughts here.
Adam dans toute sa splendeur, mémorable. Le reste de l’histoire est tout simplement prenant. Il fallait bien terminer autour d’un bon repas pour remettre Hoss en selle. 🤠🥩☕
Merci, Monique for your lovely comments. I really enjoyed writing Adam in this story. I’m glad you liked the lingo added in and what’s better than a meal with friends to recover from a harrowing experience. Thanks so much for reading.
Good story. You portrayed Adam well. Love it
Thank you Jose. I’m glad you liked the way Adam was portrayed and that you enjoyed the story.