No More Security (by Patina)

Reviewer: sklamb Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 16 Oct 2013 05:12 pm Title: No More Security What a pleasure to see Adam clear all his frustration out of his system and be able to make peace with the family again afterwards! Yes, yes, I realize Joe’s victory wasn’t really Hoss’s fault, but Hoss is big enough, in every sense of the word, to absorb what Adam has to vent, and he did hand Joe the opportunity on a silver platter when he gambled away the original stake. And it’s also fun to see Joe’s machinations come out on top for once–not so much because he does win that race “fair and square” but because he finds the perfect “forever home” for the “hayburner” himself, unlike those who’re just planning to win a packet using the horse and then discard him again….An amusing sidelight on one of my favorite episodes–thank you very much!*
Reviewer: Cheaux Signed starstarhalf-star
Date: 12 May 2012 07:39 pm Title: No More Security A difficult read because of the affected language, but I liked that you continued The Hayburner from Hoss’s point of view.  I especially liked Adam’s walk back when he noticed all of his belongings in the street–especially the scabbard.  I could just see that scene in real life.  And I REALLY liked the last line!*
Reviewer: kima09 Anonymous
Date: 03 Aug 2011 06:34 pm Title: No More Security Good story. You sure got Hoss’ speech down right – I could hear him talking in my head as I was reading.Author’s Response: Thank you, Kima! I’m so pleased to know you enjoyed Hoss telling what happened after the race.*
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous
Date: 12 Aug 2010 09:48 pm Title: No More Security Funny!Author’s Response:Thank you!*
Reviewer: jojay Anonymous
Date: 30 Nov 2009 01:01 pm Title: No More Security Excellent!!  Just the way I always imagined it!Author’s Response:Thank you, jojay!  I’m so pleased!

Author: patina

I'm a historical archaeologist who loves westerns and Bonanza is my favorite. I wrote my first Bonanza story in 2006 and the plot bunnies are still hopping. The majority of my stories include the entire family and many are prequels set during the period when Ben and Marie were married.

8 thoughts on “No More Security (by Patina)

  1. I suppose Adam felt Hoss deserved what he got and, in the scheme of things, I guess it wasn’t too bad. And I reckon that is probably how men in those days would settle their differences, but I still felt a bit sorry for Hoss. He does try to be fair to all, doesn’t he?
    Good way to end the episode, though
    Little Joe forever

    Edited to remove spoilers

  2. Sometimes you just have to get that frustration out and then you’re back to normal. Poor Hoss was just the last straw for Adam. I’m glad he wasn’t too hard on Hoss.

  3. I love Hoss but he sorta had it coming, didn’t he? A fitting follow up to one of my favorite episodes. You write Hoss so well, Patina. 🙂

    1. LOL, Beej! Adam certainly felt betrayed by Hoss’s double-cross. If only the cameras had rolled a few minutes longer…

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