Guess Who’s Coming to Dinner (by freyakendra)

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Reviewer: JoeC Signed starstarstarstarstar

Date: 16 Jun 2013 03:29 am Title: Chapter 1

Now, that I call an interesting story. Your description about this Carter gave me goosebumps. With this story I thought how usefull mobiles are today. Fun read. Thanx for sharing. JoeC

Author’s Response:

Thanks, JoeC! Yep! Mobile phones sure are life savers! It’s hard to think how we ever got by without them! But then…not having them allowed for some great suspenceful stories — both fictional and non-fictional. 😉

Reviewer: sklamb Signed starstarstarstarstar

Date: 25 Mar 2013 09:50 am Title: Chapter 1

Now that was a spooky story and a half! Are you sure this isn’t Halloween? 😉

Enjoyed the different ways Carter managed to swindle the boys–and I can’t help wondering how on earth Ben was able to turn the tables! (Going to be an interesting conversation at the International House, that’s for sure!)

Thank you so much for this well-distilled and delicious treat!

Author’s Response:

(I just noticed I have several un-replied-to reviews on this story! Forgive my lateness! ;)) Thanks, sklamb! I can just imagine that dinner conversation between the boys! As to Ben? He’s got genes to produce Adam’s smarts, Hoss’s strength and Joe’s quick thinking, so he’s got to have a chance to use all that once in a while! 😉

Reviewer: Cheaux Signed

Date: 24 Mar 2013 05:07 pm Title: Chapter 1

You really did justice to the challenge in a way I never would have anticipated and kept me guessing all the way.   Well done!

Author’s Response:

Thanks, Cheaux (sorry for the late reply!) I had fun writing this one!

Reviewer: Snuffybear Signed

Date: 03 Mar 2013 08:39 am Title: Chapter 1

Excellent story-kind of creepy, a little humorous and a sneak peek into Ben’s past. Well done!

Author’s Response:

Thank you! (sorry for the late reply) I’m really glad you liked it! 😉

Reviewer: Sibylle Signed starstarstarstarstar

Date: 02 Mar 2013 08:09 pm Title: Chapter 1

Even it doesn´t really matter I would like to know what Pa did.

A great, fascinating story.

Author’s Response:

Yep, it would be interesting to hear Pa tell his story, wouldn’t it? Hmmm… 😉 I’m glad you enjoyed this! (sorry for the late reply)

Reviewer: Laurie Anonymous starstarstarstarstar

Date: 01 Mar 2013 08:02 pm Title: Chapter 1

interesting take, thanks

Reviewer: faust Signed

Date: 01 Mar 2013 10:30 am Title: Chapter 1

Quite the ride between drama and comedy, well balanced and written in your usual captivating way. A brilliant read!

Author’s Response:

Thanks a million, faust! (sorry it took me so long to reply!)

Reviewer: dmc824 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar

Date: 01 Mar 2013 09:56 am Title: Chapter 1

Great story! I love the surprise ending!

Author’s Response:

Thank you! I’m glad you liked it!

Reviewer: kima09 Anonymous

Date: 28 Feb 2013 11:38 pm Title: Chapter 1

Good story Freya. You had me guessing to the end.

Author’s Response:

Thank you! I’m very glad you enjoyed it!

Reviewer: BluewindFarm Signed

Date: 28 Feb 2013 07:01 pm Title: Chapter 1

Oh my, what a fun way to end the story and turn the tables on Ben’s warning against going to the saloon… Only the Cartwright three!

Author’s Response:

Thanks! I had fun writing it! Spent more time on it than I should have, but I enjoyed it! 😉 And yep! “The Cartwrights Three!” 😀

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