Reviewer: mohegan Signed 
Date: 18 May 2011 12:54 am Title: A Woman Cloaked in Scandal This story explained very well the time lapse between the kiss and the fight in the bunkhouse, but it does leave the reader thinking: poor Adam, he may have peacefully resolved things in his own mind, but he’s sure in for a pounding when he gets home. He would have been unprepared for that on all levels.Author’s Response: Thank you, mohegan. Adam must have gone somewhere since it was after dark when he returned home from the Miller place. I’m glad to know my story is a good possibility for what Adam did before confronting Hoss.*
Date: 18 May 2011 12:54 am Title: A Woman Cloaked in Scandal This story explained very well the time lapse between the kiss and the fight in the bunkhouse, but it does leave the reader thinking: poor Adam, he may have peacefully resolved things in his own mind, but he’s sure in for a pounding when he gets home. He would have been unprepared for that on all levels.Author’s Response: Thank you, mohegan. Adam must have gone somewhere since it was after dark when he returned home from the Miller place. I’m glad to know my story is a good possibility for what Adam did before confronting Hoss.*
Reviewer: jojay Anonymous
Date: 30 Nov 2009 11:54 am Title: A Woman Cloaked in Scandal I had never really thought about those two and the “notrious” connection before. Well written and thoughtful!Author’s Response:Thank you, jojay. There were just tiny hints dropped about Marie’s past, but she seemed to be as “scandalous” as Regan. I’m pleased to know you enjoyed this story.*
Date: 30 Nov 2009 11:54 am Title: A Woman Cloaked in Scandal I had never really thought about those two and the “notrious” connection before. Well written and thoughtful!Author’s Response:Thank you, jojay. There were just tiny hints dropped about Marie’s past, but she seemed to be as “scandalous” as Regan. I’m pleased to know you enjoyed this story.*
Reviewer: TeddyBuletti Anonymous
Date: 19 Apr 2009 09:32 am Title: A Woman Cloaked in Scandal I enjoyed reading your story very much, Patina! I was very touched by Adam’s reflection on Hoss and Marie. I loved the flashback.Author’s Response:Thank you, Teddy! I’m so pleased to know you enjoyed this story.*
Date: 19 Apr 2009 09:32 am Title: A Woman Cloaked in Scandal I enjoyed reading your story very much, Patina! I was very touched by Adam’s reflection on Hoss and Marie. I loved the flashback.Author’s Response:Thank you, Teddy! I’m so pleased to know you enjoyed this story.*
Reviewer: Sunjae Anonymous
Date: 20 Mar 2009 06:45 pm Title: A Woman Cloaked in Scandal Terrific job, Patina. You made Marie very real and Adam’s relationship with her is believable. You also explained the missing hours in the story. I always thought it was weird that Adam saw Regan around 11AM and didn’t return to the Ponderosa until after dark.Thanks for writing this.Author’s Response:Thank you, Sunjae! It does seem strange that Adam disappears for so long and we have no idea where he’s been the whole time. I’m so pleased to know you found my “explanation” believable.*
Date: 20 Mar 2009 06:45 pm Title: A Woman Cloaked in Scandal Terrific job, Patina. You made Marie very real and Adam’s relationship with her is believable. You also explained the missing hours in the story. I always thought it was weird that Adam saw Regan around 11AM and didn’t return to the Ponderosa until after dark.Thanks for writing this.Author’s Response:Thank you, Sunjae! It does seem strange that Adam disappears for so long and we have no idea where he’s been the whole time. I’m so pleased to know you found my “explanation” believable.*
Reviewer: indyanna130 Anonymous
Date: 06 Mar 2009 03:16 pm Title: A Woman Cloaked in Scandal I liked this. I like the way you had Adam not have hatred for Marie. And the struggle Adam had when he had to make the decision…poignant. DianeAuthor’s Response:Thank you, Indy! Adam must have come to love Marie quite dearly and accepted her as his mother. The decision he had to make after that kiss couldn’t have been an easy one. I’m so pleased to know you enjoyed this story.*
Date: 06 Mar 2009 03:16 pm Title: A Woman Cloaked in Scandal I liked this. I like the way you had Adam not have hatred for Marie. And the struggle Adam had when he had to make the decision…poignant. DianeAuthor’s Response:Thank you, Indy! Adam must have come to love Marie quite dearly and accepted her as his mother. The decision he had to make after that kiss couldn’t have been an easy one. I’m so pleased to know you enjoyed this story.*
Reviewer: territell Signed
Date: 03 Mar 2009 04:43 pm Title: A Woman Cloaked in Scandal That was very touching Patina and I loved the way you explained Adam’s developing relationship with Marie.Author’s Response:Thank you, Terri, for letting me know you enjoyed this story.
Date: 03 Mar 2009 04:43 pm Title: A Woman Cloaked in Scandal That was very touching Patina and I loved the way you explained Adam’s developing relationship with Marie.Author’s Response:Thank you, Terri, for letting me know you enjoyed this story.
I was in the mood for some SWIB fics this morning. The connection between Marie and Regan would have never crossed my mind… it really does make a lot of sense. Nice peek into Adam’s thoughts. Wish there was a way to warn him about what he’s headed home to. Thanks patina.
Thank you for giving this story a read, Beej. Regan’s “past” was only hinted at in the episode, much like Marie’s past was. I’m glad to know you enjoyed this.
I’d never thought to make the connection between Marie and Regan. Good insights into Adam’s thoughts.
Thank you, jojay. Both Regan and Marie had mysterious and hinted-at pasts yet Cartwright men were willing to forgive and forget what both women had done before. Thank you for letting me know you enjoyed this story.