Moon Blind (by Patina)

Reviewer: jojay Anonymous
Date: 01 Apr 2013 05:53 am Title: Moon Blind His brother’s sure do have Joe pegged!  Very nice fill-in to the story.*
Reviewer: JoeC Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Mar 2013 04:27 am Title: Moon Blind With little story you showed the Cartwright family life as I imagined it always. A little brother teasing, a father who knows his sons and special his youngest. You wrote it so graphic that I could see this scene in my head. Thanx for this story. JoeC*
Reviewer: Cheaux Signed
Date: 01 Mar 2013 09:43 pm Title: Moon Blind Good scene for this episode.  I love the repetition of “moon blind” throughout.  You’re on a roll, Patina, with these challenges!*
Reviewer: faust Signed
Date: 01 Mar 2013 10:43 am Title: Moon Blind I love the light heartedness in this piece! It’s good to see just a happy banter between the boys for once. you write these conversations so well, patina!Author’s Response: Thank you, faust! Light, family moments such as this are fun (for me) to write. I’m so glad to know you enjoyed it!*
Reviewer: BluewindFarm Signed
Date: 01 Mar 2013 04:58 am Title: Moon Blind Brotherly love at its best… Moon blind, all three of them.Author’s Response: Thank you, BluewindFarm!*
Reviewer: bahj Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01 Mar 2013 01:18 am Title: Moon Blind”Moon blind” that’s a phrase I’m not familiar with and one I’m sure Little Joe would rather not hear of again, Lol. Most of the time I wish I’d had an older brother, but reading about times like these help to squelch that desire :0) Great job; thanks so much for sharing your time and this fun story with us!Author’s Response: Thank you, bahj! I have an older brother–they’re not all they’re cracked up to be. 😉 Seems like the scene in which Joe kissed Michele Dubois was one in which moonlight just didn’t work its magic in his favor (lol). Glad you enjoyed this little tale!

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Reviewer: BettyHT Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28 Feb 2013 11:14 pm Title: Moon Blind A funny take on that part of the episode:  well done!Author’s Response: Thank you, BettyHT! Glad you enjoyed it!

Author: patina

I'm a historical archaeologist who loves westerns and Bonanza is my favorite. I wrote my first Bonanza story in 2006 and the plot bunnies are still hopping. The majority of my stories include the entire family and many are prequels set during the period when Ben and Marie were married.

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